Fic: ‘aim straight and true’

[morethanacandle]

Title: aim straight and true
Fandom: Once Upon a Time (OUaT)
Rating: (PG)
Time Period: Season 1, episode 3: Charming & Snow escaping the Queen’s guards.
Summary: He aims and fires.

Author's Note: This is quick ‘n’ dirty (for definition see the F. A. Q.).Thinking of episode 3, this scene came to mind. I’ve not written an action scene in some time

Comments

[emiv]

This makes me want to rewatch to scene in question! ;)

Like everything related to the Queen, it, too, is black.

Lovely.

Quiet reigns.

Nicely ended; I love the play on words here. :)

[morethanacandle]

This makes me want to rewatch to scene in question! ;)
Me as well!

Nicely ended; I love the play on words here. :)
Thank you; I’m glad that play worked.

[angel_in_tears]

[morethanacandle]

I wasn't very sure it would be since I've only seen up to the third episode!

[angel_in_tears]

[morethanacandle]

Thank you; I've been concerned as to whether what I was writing was fitting various characters and the show.

I'm afraid you'll be inundated with small scenes like this while I watch and get used to characters. =P

[armchairdm]

Heh. Both in watching it; and reading this, it makes me think of Robin Hood more than 'Prince Charming'.

[morethanacandle]

He was trained in many weapons as befitting his station?

[armchairdm]

Well yeah; but I don't generally think of a Prince being trained in that many weapons. A longsword is fairly cliched; but other than that...

[morethanacandle]

... wow.