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Crocodile Tears [14/?]

Jul 03, 2010 21:11

Title: Crocodile Tears [14/?]

Rating: R

Fandom: Bandom [Elliot Minor/Empires/Suns]

Pairing(s): So far, Tom Conrad/ Mikey Russell

Summary: Murder and abduction is never easy, but the Princes in the Tower case is turning out to be something else entirely. Alex Davies wasn't expecting this after the Bernstein case.

Genre: AU/Angst

Warnings: swearing, ( Read more... )

bf:empires, bf:suns/wax on radio, crocodile tears, bf:elliot minor

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overstreets July 3 2010, 20:20:42 UTC

Rebecca is crazycakes, needs to be put down, etc.

More please!

mordentlore July 3 2010, 20:22:13 UTC

Realism has stopped the next part >:(

overstreets July 3 2010, 20:25:22 UTC

Noo :( Down with realism.

mordentlore July 3 2010, 20:26:28 UTC

Stupid poisonous gas unable to be contained >(

overstreets July 3 2010, 20:27:35 UTC

Gas masks?

mordentlore July 3 2010, 20:28:18 UTC

I need to check the location of the tower of london... XDD

So. How be Eden-life?

overstreets July 3 2010, 20:29:33 UTC

I wouldn't pick up on any geographical mistakes anyway 8D

Important assignment due Wednesday, so I've been writing fic for the last couple days. IT MAKES SENSE TO ME.

mordentlore July 3 2010, 20:31:25 UTC

This is one of the fics I'd consider changing the names and publishing though, so I need to it be as correct as possible XDD

YES, I SEE. TOTALLY XD

overstreets July 3 2010, 20:34:24 UTC

You could always go back and edit, JUST WRITE QUICKLY PLZ AND TY.

It's from Ed's POV and somehow IT'S STILL ALL ABOUT ALEX.

mordentlore July 3 2010, 20:35:24 UTC

I've written up to about chapter eighteen! XDDD

LOL. LIKE THIS FIC WAS SUPPOSED TO BE ALL ABOUT ALEX AND ENDED UP BEING ABOUT MIKEY?

overstreets July 3 2010, 20:38:05 UTC

YAY LONG FIC =D

YES. But knowing me... in the back of my mind I probably always intended it to be about Alex anyway.

Here, you get Alex's history in crying.

Before he left for Japan, he could count on one hand the times he’s seen Alex cry. He’d cried quietly to himself when he accidentally ran over a baby rabbit with his car while Ed tried to convince him that he was now in Rabbit Heaven. He’d cried when he broke his left index finger with a hammer in shop class-though that had been more of him cursing profusely with tears streaming down his face than actual crying, but it still counts to Ed. And he’d cried the day he and Colin went and put flowers on his mother’s grave on the fifteenth anniversary of her death. Alex doesn’t talk about or visit his mother’s grave often, but Colin had asked him to come that day. To Ed’s knowledge, Alex hasn’t been since.

mordentlore July 3 2010, 20:42:37 UTC

MY AIM IS FOR IT TO BE LONGER THAN NAZI.

I see your history of Alex in crying and raise you a ghost tales of the Tower of London.

“Anne Boleyn. Henry VI.” The father of two ticked them off on his fingers, paused in the moonlight. “Lady Jane Grey, Margaret Pole. A bear... I think it heralds death or something. Basically, if you see it, run like the fucking wind. Oh, and the princes. The actual princes, not mine.”

overstreets July 3 2010, 20:43:44 UTC

ALEX IS A PRINCEESS. THERE.

mordentlore July 3 2010, 20:46:57 UTC

LOL WTF?

overstreets July 3 2010, 20:49:50 UTC

SIMPLE FACTS OF LIFE.

Name a random type of cancer.

mordentlore July 3 2010, 20:50:27 UTC

Hodgkin's Lymphoma.

/first cancer I thought of, as a girl in my year had it.

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