i wrote 4 poems last night.... not very good but give me your opinions

[morbidpoet]

losing that person you
love so dearly
is like losing a part of
yourself
but by losing someone
you gain something
in return
love of life
and the living
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lonelyness is all i feel
i kneel
and pray to something
so cruel
how could it do this
to me?
how could it do this
to them?
is there no mercy
for all these lost souls
including mine
this feeling of love
for this person (some call God)
is not turning into merciless
hate
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i love you
with all my heart
i wish we would
never part
but that day has come
i know you will
someday return
on that day
that you arrive
i will be waiting
there for you
with the present
of a smile
i will never feel
whole without you
i hope you feel
the same way too
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gone
it seems forever
heart aches when
thinking of 2 a part
trying to rememeber
the days without him
so lonely and depressing
waiting with open arms
for that one special
day when he is
seen again
this man is the
start of a new life
filled with happiness
and love
to good to be true
hoping that this
feeling
will never end
just waiting for them
to be together again