Fic: Slow and Easy (Oz/Devon Ficathon)

Aug 31, 2004 09:29

Title: Slow and Easy
Author: Moosesal
Rating: NC-17
Written for: katemonkey for the Oz/Devon ficathon as part of the year_of_oz community. Kate wanted nail polish and suntans, but no angst.
Beta: Many thanks to silvertedy. You really helped me keep this clean and streamlined. Thank you, babe.
Note: This is pretty short. 999 words. I just couldn't quite reach 1,000. But it's ( Read more... )

fics buffyverse, slash, oz

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aimeelicious August 31 2004, 07:19:44 UTC
So, so gorgeous. I actually feel like my rough edges this morning got smoothed out from reading this, as though I were on the beach, warm and relaxed, being thoroughly loved myself. And who needs dialog, especially where Oz is concerned? I can totally see the two of them sharing an entire day like this, with no words spoken at all.

Can never say enough how much I enjoy your writing.

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moosesal August 31 2004, 07:34:42 UTC
Thank you, dear. I know you know how it feels to write something that you feel all attached to and then sit and wait for someone to read it and like it. I loved writing this story. It just flowed out of me and I feel so good about it.

I'm so glad the mood came through, because I want it to be calming and soothing. I liked writing sex that was just sort of laid back and happening, no rushing, no driving towards anything, just letting it come. (pun intended)

Can never say enough how much I enjoy your writing.
*blushes* Thank you, dear. Right back at you.

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tabaqui August 31 2004, 07:21:32 UTC
Wow...slow and sweet and easy, exactly as it should be when it's all about Oz and Devon...
I like that.
Love how the wolf feels around Devon, that's very cool.
On the beach, under the sun, seemed to be the only time it was safe to bare your throat in Sunnydale.

Like that too.
*bounce*
Lovely.

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moosesal August 31 2004, 07:36:21 UTC
The 'bare your throat' just came to me and had to be used. I'm glad you liked this. Thanks for the feedback. I was nervous to sign up for this ficathon because I didn't think I could write Devon, but doing it this way just felt natural and I think it works well for the pairing.

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tabaqui August 31 2004, 08:29:27 UTC
Yeah, Devon was so not there, he's difficult to write, especially since he was so one-dimensional.
This worked excellently - just lovely!

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poshcat August 31 2004, 07:28:47 UTC
I really enjoyed that, Sal. Not just the hotness (of which there was plenty), but the peaceful feelings. I wish I was on the beach!!!

Thanks for sharing this story with us. :0)

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moosesal August 31 2004, 07:38:21 UTC
And thank you, luv. I like the peacefulness too. I don't think we get enough fic with sex that is just slow and relaxed and not about anything but just feeling. This isn't a romantic relationship, but it's not just fuck buddies getting their end off either. It's just two friends, sharing a moment, being in the moment, being together. *sigh* I wish I was on the beach ... with Oz. :)

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moosesal August 31 2004, 08:45:01 UTC
Bows.

Thank you, love. It was wonderfully enjoyable to write. So soothing. I need a note at the top that says "Here there be no angst. Take off your shoes, sit in the sand, and watch the boys in all their sexy languor."

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moosesal September 1 2004, 06:24:52 UTC
Well, thank you, ma'am. It was a pleasure to write.

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