"Masturbation Theater" (Spike/Xander Pornathon Fic)

[moosesal]

The Spike/Xander Pornathon master list is now up. Thank you tgray for organizing this. Here's my entry.

Title: Masturbation Theater
Author: Moosesal
Pairing: Spike/Xander with Andrew
Written for: riani1 for tgray’s Spike/Xander Pornathon
Request: No daddykink, non-con (though if somebody has to be talked into something that's OK), or brutality.

Comments

[entrenous88]

Very intriguing -- hot and poignant. Works really well as a complete piece even though we don't know the details of what's going on with Xander and Spike. I liked the way that Andrew kept focusing on the physical -- sort of a get-on-with-it attitude -- even while the limited perspective of the one camera and the story through Andrew's pov revealed the emotional side of the encounter. Nicely done.

[moosesal]

Thank you. Originally, Andrew had picture and sound. But the dialogue was getting a bit too mushy and the boys were never gonna have sex with the words that were coming out of their mouths. So I cut the sound and voila! Sex. Which is good, cause this was a pornathon, after all.

Glad you liked. I had fun getting into Andrew's head a bit. But it was hard to try to show everything with Andrew's limited pov. I think it turned out okay. It's not great literature, but I think it works for a pornathon.

Thanks again for the feedback.