Comments | moonstruck88: So Many Vases, a House/Cam fic in 4 parts

moonstruck88

So Many Vases, a House/Cam fic in 4 parts

Sep 28, 2006 22:54

Rating: R
Summary: The challenge is teaching her what's dead and what isn't. She's a terrible judge of people.
Spoilers: Up to 3.3 is fair game. Though nothing is really spoilerish.

The clouds are clearing. But the world is still gray.

For gorenhouseygirl.

And princessklutz04 is the beta of all betas.

( So Many Vases )

Comments 8

vgsgirl September 29 2006, 03:51:51 UTC

Wow. Absolutely fantastic story, and it's really refreshing to read your writing, it's a different style from a lot of the fanfiction around, and it's just beautiful. You've got a very nice way with words, everything just flows and fits. I also like how you looked at the House/Cam ship from a different perspective... loved this tug of war that was going on at the end. Great job! :)

moonstruck88 September 29 2006, 04:01:49 UTC

Thank you for the compliment. I like to know how people are responding to my style - it's rare for someone to comment on that particular aspect of a fic. I'm glad you liked the tug of war! I thought it'd be cute for them.

Thanks for reading, vgsgirl.

kathrynthegr8 September 29 2006, 15:19:58 UTC

Wonderful ending! You capture their dance so well, the give and take. Thanks for sharing this. I hope you write another soon.

KTG

moonstruck88 September 30 2006, 03:03:09 UTC

The ending took me a long time to write. But I think it worked, and I'm glad you liked it. Thank's for the comment!

psychedk October 5 2006, 19:08:37 UTC

Whoah! With all the House fanfic lying around it's easy to find crap, and rare to find real talent like yours. And I tell you I'm very picky :) I love the present time writing, and you've captured House flawlessly, both his thoughts and body language. And also Cameron. Both very in character and believeable. God I whish this would happen on-screen! I hope you keep writing! :)

moonstruck88 October 8 2006, 04:43:13 UTC

Wow. *blushes* I'm thrilled you find my House, and my Cameron, to be in character. House is a complex guy to capture. I'm glad you enjoyed my fic, and I definitely plan to keep writing :) Encouragement never hurts.

nurse_stiney February 26 2007, 01:10:35 UTC

Wow...I REALLY like your House-voice. The vulnerability that you'd probably NEVER see on the show is just out on display here, and it's beautiful and painful and just...Guh. I love it like WHOA. Definitely going in my mems!!

moonstruck88 February 28 2007, 09:40:44 UTC

Thank you so much. It's been several months since I've even looked at this story. After reading your comment, I was compelled to go back and read the story. And to remember how much I love writing. I think I might start writing again.

Thanks, nurse_stiney.