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[moonshadow_nal]

Title: Licorice Sticks and Aniseed Balls
Chapter Title: Not Quite the Straight and Narrow
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Not mine
Pairings: Harry/James, Lily/James
Chapter Summary: Sirius is angry and Harry is spiteful. James is upset and Harry is gay.
Author's Notes: Post-practice scene inspired a cookie from the SS Expelliarmus Cookie Jar (Harry/

Comments

[masterofmercury]

he forced out, looking torn between glee at the idea of finally getting a decent player in the position, and resentment, simply because he and Harry had never managed to get along.
*giggle* Oh, James...

Harry paused for a moment, before grabbing the front of James’ school jumper in his fist, and pressing the older boy’s lips against his own. ‘I’m gay,’ he stated
shgdfjasghd GO HARRY! Finally!

I can't wait to read more. :D

[moonshadow_nal]

GO HARRY! Finally!
*Grins* It certainly took him long enough.

[twins_randomity]

I flail, I really do. I'll comment after class, and then I'll be coherent, but the most I can come up with at the moment, is a general twitching, and the need to go 'Hee!' quite loudly.

[moonshadow_nal]

*Grins*

[twins_randomity]

So, this is my (semi) coherent review:

Did you mean to put in the Sirius/Remus vibes?
Of course we should make Harry a Seeker!
So that's were the Licorice in the title came from!
KISS! About Lily! *flail*

It took me a bit to figure out who Greene was, but maybe I just need to reread previous chapters. That's about as coherent as I get, I'm afraid. This is, also, an attempt a concrit, but I think it failed.

[moonshadow_nal]

Did you mean to put in the Sirius/Remus vibes?
No, actually. But I did intend to add it in eventually, so I guess it doesn't matter all that much.

It took me a bit to figure out who Greene was, but maybe I just need to reread previous chapters.
Greene (I think his first name was Thomas), was mentioned during the Quidditch match in chapter 8 - the really hopeless seeker who missed a damaged snitch. On ffn, a large percentage of my reviewers were calling for Harry to be made seeker instead of Greene, which explains the A/N. I seem to have grown unintentionally fond of him.

Glad you liked it!

[cadencecascade]

*giggles* utterly adorable! Shakeitup!Harry! lol

[moonshadow_nal]

Thanks! ^__^

[snakefever]

SWEET that's the only word i can think and know excuse me while i get some licorice *winks*

[moonshadow_nal]

Excused.

*Grins* Glad you liked it.

update soon!

[anonymous]

hello,
you don't me and I don't know you, but I wanted to say I love story so much
and I'm asking you, please, continue soon and don't let me wait any longer than necessary,
because I totally love it. ;D
so, please, update this ingeniallity soon.
ps I don't think the word ingeniallity exist, but... who cares.