I just love playing with words, and mixing it with my interpretation and voila!. Took up the challenge to give a proper answer by writing a poem called Murmurs of Change to Big Brother Vincent's [ /?fit4ltr ] poem called Changes in his profile.
Murmurs of Change
by Vincent Lai •~ moonrakerz ~•
Like the wind that changes its course
Like the sails that let the wind take it away
Let your heart show its force
Let it take you on a runaway.
To the ends of every corner
To every door in your heart
Seeking answers as you dig deeper
Unlocking the rut,
enroute to a brand new start.
There's no need for people to understand
Your way of your working
You make things stand
And failing doesn't mean weakening.
I did not see you pretend
I did not see you tryin´
But I saw you, the last 2 weekend
Normal again as you are, deep within.
>'> Changes
by Big Brother Vincent Lai •~ fit4ltr ~•
I sit all alone
in my room.
Not understanding......
I want them to love me
for my heart and soul.
But selfishly inside
I want them to admire
My outside appearance too.
They will never understand
the way I see myself.
It is not what I want;
I need something more.
But no matter what I do;
how I try to change
my looks on the outside.
They can still see
it is just plain old me
pretending again.
I feel a twinge
deep inside my heart.
And hear a still small voice
whisper in sweetness,
'look inside first'.
And I ponder for a moment
wondering what it could mean
and I realize...
Before I can change
the outside appearances
I must Change The Inside.