[One-Shot #1]: One Last Wish/One Last Goodbye

[moonlitwish]

Title: One Last Wish/One Last Goodbye
Rating: PG
Genre: Romance, Angst
Word Count: 2538
Status: Finished
Dedicated To:  Seong Il Y.
Summary: 'Please just tell me you want me to stay, that you need my words and my opinion and my care…my feelings. Tell me that you want me here…’

Comments

<3

[amnesictouch]

I'm sure there are no words to write here that could offer any real comfort. It would only be temporary.

But even if only that...

Oui'na rindehk cu silr, yht E fecr E luimt pa drana vun oui eh bancuh. Drec ec ymfyoc dra sucd tevvelimd bynd uv yho uhmeha namydeuhcreb, hud paehk ypma du pa drana vun dra udran. Ed sygac oui vaam cu icamacc. Fa ryja du namo cumamo uh funtc frah yldeuhc yna fryd'c haatat sucd. E fecr E luimt rumt oui yht damm oui ed'c ugyo mega oui tet vun sa dryd tyo.

Druikr fryd fa pudr aqbaneahlat fyc cesemyn, ed fyc ymcu tevvanahd eh syho fyoc. E tuh'd ghuf silr ypuid ouin namydeuhcreb fedr dryd Pypu palyica oui dfu sucdmo dymgat ujan YES, pid ed'c duu upjeuic ruf silr oui lyna vun res. Yht E dnimo ruba dryd yd dra maycd oui lyh cdemm pa vneahtc, palyica vun sa du esykeha Zya lusbmadamo tecybbaynehk.. Ryry, famm, zicd dra druikrd nekrd drana aycemo pnuikrd daync du so aoac.

E's kmyt dryd oui fnuda drec, yht E ruba ed rambat oui jahd ouin vnicdnydeuh. Ed dudymmo pamuhkc fedr Uha Mycd Kuutpoa. <3

Re: <3

[moonlitwish]

You being here is always comfort enough ♥ We don't need to be physically within reach to each other...just our laughter and our jokes, and the knowledge that we do have each other no matter.

That's the best thing about online friendships, we know it can survive distance C: And when we get to see each other in person, it's ten times sweeter.

언제나 고마워 요 ♥

[marinosakuraba]

One major thing. I believe this'd be better categorized as angst. =3

And there are so many things I feel like saying(that I actually tend to yell whilst reading) that are useless. It is incredibly difficult to read that without trying to relate it. Impossible, even, so it's impractical to sit here going "good story! good story!"

-hug- Also, I feel so unspecial just speaking in english. It's like, "woo, english. how exotic." SO... Du sollst ihm im Gesicht schlagen. >3

[moonlitwish]

LOL

Sarah -snuggles- ♥

With all the times that we use a different language, English should be considered exotic. Of course I have no idea what you just wrote in German, woman D:

[amnesictouch]

'Drui crymd payd res eh dra vyla.'

[moonlitwish]

AHAHAHAHA. OMG.

I'm all for punching him in the face ♥ Or Eric can still sit on him, while Sarah L kicks, and Sarah H punches him in the face :D ILL BE HOLDING THE DIGITAL CAMERA ♥

He told me not to send him people to punch him though D: I guess this is a different matter.

[sayuri_chung]

o___o omg i love it <3

you capture the moment very well~ :o its as if the reader can sort of feel the emotion of the main character :x yet at the same time you truly dont understand her pain fully o-o

it made me cry :x <3

[moonlitwish]

Aww, Bella -squishes- ♥ Thank you ♥