Short story for English --- Should I leave it as is or continue on for a bit and wrap it up more?
Carlos had opened the bag to reveal a rather sparkling discovery. Diamond necklaces, diamond rings, diamond bracelets, all shimmering in the warm morning light. The office ceiling and walls were a beautiful sight, as a thousand rainbows parading as prisms of light danced around the room.
“Carlos, I also need you to go through the… Are those diamonds?!” Catherine shrieked, her knowledge accumulated from reading page 3 of the morning paper furthering her horror.
“No, no, they…aren’t.” Carlos lied, lowering his eyes in shame.
“I’m ringing the police. You stay where you are!”
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Arghhhhh why is that copy + pasting in a different font from the rest of it? Blarghh! So annoying.
I showed my teacher this much of it, and she said that she thinks I could end it there...
I think that she is concerned i'll write like, four more pages of this supposed-to-be-400-to-500-words-only short story and THEN hand it in. lols.
Hmm. What do you think? Should I leave it there or wrap it up somehow?
“Carlos, I also need you to go through the… Are those diamonds?!” Catherine shrieked, her knowledge accumulated from reading page 3 of the morning paper furthering her horror.
“No, no, they…aren’t.” Carlos lied, lowering his eyes in shame.
“I’m ringing the police. You stay where you are!”
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Arghhhhh why is that copy + pasting in a different font from the rest of it? Blarghh! So annoying.
I showed my teacher this much of it, and she said that she thinks I could end it there...
I think that she is concerned i'll write like, four more pages of this supposed-to-be-400-to-500-words-only short story and THEN hand it in. lols.
Hmm. What do you think? Should I leave it there or wrap it up somehow?