Road Trip, Chapter 3

[donnamour1969]

Title: Road Trip
Fandom : Moonlight
Characters : Mick, Beth, Josef, Simone
Rating : R, for some sexual content and strong language.
Spoilers: Post -"Sonata"
Summary:  Tenth  in my post-Sonata series.  Josef hires an RV to take the gang across country to meet Simone's parents.  Fun, humorous, and dangerous adventures await them.  Told in alternating pov'

Comments

[marykedz]

Another fun chapter. Loved the heel-staking! I am really liking this story. I thought I would get confused with all four voices but I like it. This was a great idea. Another person might have made this too out of character but you really make it work. I am really looking forward to seeing what happens. There are just so many possibilities.

[donnamour1969]

Why, thank you. I admit it has been a challenge to keep all the voices distinct, but they really are such different people that it hasn't been as difficult as I first thought. Simone is still the most challenging because this is the first time I've heard her "voice." More to come--thanks again!

[ladyailith]

Both of those vamps got exactly what they deserved! Simone certainly was creative, wasn't she? Now vamps not only have to watch out for stakes, they have to be on the lookout for 4" heels as well! LOL!!

Nicely done. I'm looking forward to future chapters!

[donnamour1969]

Thank you! And I forgot to give credit to my daughter for the high heel idea. (Thanks, Cassie!)Oh,and the motorcycle suggestion came from my hubby. (Thanks,Dear!). And I appreciate you and your faithful reviews. More soon!

Road trip

[toria515]

This is a great story although It's hard to imagine them in an RV.Simone's was so funny and creative in the way she saved Beth. The 4 of them together trying to out pun the others made me crack up!

One tip: typo in Mick's call to Beth. You wrote that he and Josef hadn't separated when in fact, they had.

Re: Road trip

[donnamour1969]

I wanted to do a road trip story, and toyed around with ways they would travel. I figured that with their special needs as vampires, this would be the best way to provide for that. Plus, I thought train and car travel would be too boring, and private jet too fast. I do hope I've made it realistic. You're not the only one who has expressed some skepticism, lol. But I'm glad there's enough stuff that you can imagine happening to keep you reading and reviewing.

Oh, and thanks for pointing out my typo. I'm off to fix that right now!

[revdorothyl]

Simone's killer fashion sense to the rescue! Love it!

[donnamour1969]

LOL. My daughter was brilliant to think of the shoe idea, lol. I'll pass your praise on to her. Thanks as always for your review--it really means a lot.

[dragonflylady77]

Hee!! Go Simone!! She's certainly resourceful. ^_^

I like the four voices, gives the story a lot of energy.