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My Fair Vampire, Chapter 4

Mar 24, 2010 22:52

Title: My Fair Vampire
Fandom : Moonlight
Characters : Josef, Simone, Mick, Beth
Rating : R, for some sexual content and strong language.
Spoilers: Post "Sonata"
Summary : 9th entry into my post- "Sonata" series. Josef agrees to turn Simone, but naturally it's not going to be that simple. Simone has a mind of her own. Could she be Eliza Doolittle to ( Read more... )

mick, josef

Comments 7

ladyailith March 25 2010, 05:18:27 UTC

Poor Simone - and all of the freshies that she's gone through! I guess it's not as easy as it looks... Here's hoping that she gets it before she has to meet the Council!

More please. :-)

donnamour1969 March 26 2010, 02:28:50 UTC

I did feel bad about her freshie practice casualties. But at least she's not killing them the way rogue newbies do, right? It's in a safe, controlled environment. No freshies were killed in the making of this fic, lol.

Thanks for posting!

revdorothyl March 25 2010, 15:55:19 UTC

seven smiling succubi suckled several screaming sycophants.

I LOVE Josef's personal version of "The rain in Spain stays mainly in the plain" and "In Hertford, Hereford, and Hampshire hurricanes hardly happen"!

donnamour1969 March 26 2010, 02:25:58 UTC

You're the only one whose really made the connection between the musical I'm ripping off and my fic. I knew I had to do something about teaching Simone to speak correctly, and once I hit on the fang lisp idea, I realized I needed a tongue twister. Glad you appreciate my little idea I thought of in the middle of the night. (Most of my ideas hit me like that, lol).

Thanks for continuing to read and review. I always love to hear what you think.

marykedz March 25 2010, 16:36:52 UTC

Enjoying this story very much. I keep forgetting it is from Josef's POV though. I like it but I am not used to it. I can't wait to see how Simone does at the reception.

donnamour1969 March 26 2010, 02:27:21 UTC

Yep--had to give Simone a big party to go to so Josef can show her off. Thank you for liking my fic! I like that you like it :).

dragonflylady77 May 24 2010, 12:28:25 UTC

That sounds like a lot of freshies to go through!

Poor Simone getting a crash course in how to be a vampire! So glad Mick is there to help. *giggles*