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Human Error, Chapter 4

Feb 09, 2010 18:19

Title: Human Error, Ch. 4
Fandom : Moonlight
Characters : Mick, Beth, Josef, Simone
Rating : R
Spoilers: Post "Sonata"
Summary : 8th entry into my post "Sonata" series. Beth has found what she hopes will be a good use for her leftover Black Crystal, and Mick struggles with whether to use Coraline's gift.

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mick/beth/josef

Comments 13

rungirl60 February 10 2010, 01:29:22 UTC

Wow, I did not see that one coming! Josef must really be stressed out if he wants to be human. He loves being a vampire. Can't wait to see where you'll go with this!

donnamour1969 February 11 2010, 03:14:41 UTC

Thanks for posting--glad I could surprise you. I always like being surprised by a fic, so that's a great compliment to me. My next chapter is coming soon, so you can tell me what you think of Human Josef, lol.

marykedz February 10 2010, 02:56:46 UTC

Okay that was a surprise. Human Josef?...this should be good. Excellent story as usual. Did I mention how much I love the way you really keep them all in character, even this far after the series ended.

donnamour1969 February 11 2010, 03:13:03 UTC

Thanks so much--high praise indeed! I've about worn out my DVD's getting to know these characters, so I'm glad I'm able to make you believe they're still with us. I miss them so much myself, that writing for them brings me closer to them somehow .

dejean76 February 10 2010, 03:11:50 UTC

I am loving this story... As many FF as I have read... you have thrown for a loop! Now, this is one angle I have not seen yet... Joseph asking MICK for the cure..... this should be very interesting!

Your stories are great (yours too swas) and I am TRYING to do better at leaving comments! I want all of you truly gifted writers to KEEP writing our Moonlight stories!

Thanks again!
DeJean

donnamour1969 February 11 2010, 03:09:36 UTC

So glad you took the time to comment. Reviews are what writers live for on the fanfic boards! It keeps us going, so please, if you like what you see (whether from me, or any other writer)let them know what you think.

And glad you are liking my story, and I'm bringing something new to the table. I don't know why, but these characters have really touched me, and it's like they're speaking through me sometimes,lol. More to come soon. Thanks again!

swas February 10 2010, 07:26:41 UTC

!!!
This is very interesting! Josef probably wouldn't take to it (but there can be *so* much fun to be had with witnessing that!)...only...taking teh cure will take some of he last stock Mick has. Would he actually consider doing that? I can see a fight Mick/Josef coming on about it - Josef accusing Mick of not wanting to take it but hoarding it anyway...oh boy! But that's just my take on it :)

Have fun writing the next chaps! I envy you for a good plotbunny :)

donnamour1969 February 11 2010, 03:06:43 UTC

Some good ideas you had there...And yes, I'm having fun writing the next chapter. Hope you enjoy a human Josef, lol. More to come soon!

anonymous February 10 2010, 20:34:10 UTC

Loved it!! I would love it if Mick turned Beth and Josef and Simone wound up human. This is so good just please keep it going.

donnamour1969 February 11 2010, 03:05:12 UTC

Now that's an idea I hadn't thought of, lol. Thanks so much for liking my story enough to review. I'm still going strong, and will be posting Ch. 5 soon!