so don't you dare try and walk away; we'll get through this together - that i promise

Dec 26, 2009 23:26


a year ago in winter,
yunho/jaejoong, ot5; pg; romance, love; 878 w. in this part (number of parts unspecified)

after a year, has anything changed between us? (i think not; i still love you as much, maybe even more than before)

have a merry christmas; this piece is dedicated to the 5 boys who stole my heart and got away with it, happy 6th anniversary ( Read more... )

genre: romance, length: oneshot, genre: love, pairing: yunho/jaejoong, rating: pg, pairing: ot5

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u_knowiloveyou December 27 2009, 15:25:14 UTC
this was simple and sweet, you already know that. and i loved how you put in those little thought bubbles to portray their feelings; made it effective, impactive not that that's a word but yeah, you get the point ♥

your piece is unique because not alot of stories embrace the simplicity yours does. there are no big words or fancy terms. but that's the beauty of it, the way your words flow and out comes the emotions (i kinda forgot changmin's tearing on that day and reading this reminded me just how soft and vulnerable he really is. like how yoochun tries to comfort his younger brother - a pat to the back, a gentle touch - but there were tears in his eyes as well;)

it's never easy to have faith, isn't it? there's always hardship and suffering. but i promise you bb, this love will never fail. not when it's a friendship that surpasses all barriers - we're speaking the same thoughts, breathing the same air, and living one dream [jaejoong has a way with words, even when we do not expect it :')]

tysm for sharing that love for dongbangshinki with me :DD♥ it's always a joy to talk about them with friends who really treasure them; for their friendship, faith, hope and courage. but most of all, for what they have given us :: love.

//aktf. we need it more now than anything~~

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moonkissedx December 27 2009, 18:17:48 UTC
tysm bb ♥ i like brackets with thoughts in them, they make everything so... real. and it's easier that way sometimes, it's more concise, heh. (lmao impactive = ♥)

gosh, really, thank you. i always used to think that big words were the thing, that they were the reason why good stories were good, but now i realise that the simplest of words are the best words to use because they are the most real. about changmin being soft and vulnerable, yes, he is, he just hides that behind his snark >D but... we all tend to forget how emotional our maknae is.

no, it is never easy to have faith and keep it. sometimes the pain's just too overwhelming and it's hard to sustain the same amount, same level of faith. but i know that in the end, we'll all get through this together. we're loving for a reason, that i'm sure we're sure of. and yes, not when it's a friendship that surpasses all barriers, not when we're all one big, big family with our hearts joined as one. i love that guy, he always cheers us up in ways we don't imagine him to ♥

no, thank you for always bringing my hopes and faith up for dongbangshinki when times are hard and when shit goes down, and it's always, always a joy to talk to you about them because we both love them so, so much. as for their love, i know that it's going to last for a long, long time to come, be it for them or for us, so yes, we're going to always keep the faith, i believe in the 5 of them. to quote you: it ain't easy but it's necessary. we can do this, we can get through this together. ♥ ily, bb, tysm for everything.

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