That was adorable. I really like the way you write Artie and Tina... and this one captures their friendship so well. It was just the right amount of sweetness, and I enjoyed reading every minute of it.
“Yeah, we still haven’t heard those famous pipes of yours, Mr. Abrams,” Tina pointed out, getting a laugh out of him.
“Please don’t,” Artie shook his head at Tina.
“He doesn’t appreciate my voice like you do, Tina,” he threw her a nod, making her chuckle. She looked to Artie, as though to say ‘come on.’ He hesitated, feeling them both staring at him.
“Fine,” he shrugged. “Don’t say I didn’t warn you,” he looked to Tina. “No ballads,” he turned to his father. “Please?” he tilted his head forward.
“I’ll see what I can do,” Mr. Abrams reached for the dial with a smile.
“We’ve created a monster,” Artie whispered dramatically to Tina. She didn’t seem to mind.
I loved this part :) You did a great job capturing their personalities, and I love how you gave Arties dad so much personality :)
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“Please don’t,” Artie shook his head at Tina.
“He doesn’t appreciate my voice like you do, Tina,” he threw her a nod, making her chuckle. She looked to Artie, as though to say ‘come on.’ He hesitated, feeling them both staring at him.
“Fine,” he shrugged. “Don’t say I didn’t warn you,” he looked to Tina. “No ballads,” he turned to his father. “Please?” he tilted his head forward.
“I’ll see what I can do,” Mr. Abrams reached for the dial with a smile.
“We’ve created a monster,” Artie whispered dramatically to Tina. She didn’t seem to mind.
I loved this part :) You did a great job capturing their personalities, and I love how you gave Arties dad so much personality :)
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