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FIC: Drunken Irish Luck (2/3)

Mar 23, 2014 13:06

Title: Drunken Irish Luck
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shassie, psych fic, best things, dil, psych

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trixietru March 23 2014, 20:42:35 UTC

Another awesome chapter! Great job on the fight scene - I have a lot of trouble trying to write action, so I really appreciate seeing it done well. It's very in-character for Shawn to decide to give someone a second chance, whether they deserve it or not.

moondragon25 March 24 2014, 16:41:42 UTC

Actions scenes aren't too easy for me either. I spend a lot of time visualizing every move in my head before I write anything down.

Shawn always tries to see the best in people. And if the situation is anything similar to something he went through he's even more sympathetic.

I may do a bit of a follow-up with Pete in the next story. What do you think?