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moonchildfic

The Two Sons Job: 5/9

Sep 07, 2011 15:44

Title: The Two Sons Job: Echoes
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: gen, referenced past Eliot/Amie, Eliot/Dean
Verse: Steal The Sky
Fandoms: Leverage, Firefly, Supernatural, White Collar
Summary: Concering old friends, past history, father-son relationships, and the Burke Seven.
Notes: For the Suicide Attempt square on my H/c bingo card ( Read more... )

verse: steal the sky, challenge!fic: bingo, character: peter burke, fandom: white collar, fandom: leverage, character: eliot spencer, fandom: firefly

Comments 4

jesco0307 September 7 2011, 20:23:58 UTC

And again...back to making me wanna cry. How you get into Eliot's head and heart, it's so beautiful. But thinking about what has happened to him...makes me incredible sad. *grabs tissues - again*

lmx_v3point3 September 7 2011, 21:33:41 UTC

So this is new: Got to about half way through (yeah you know where, damn you) had the relevent realisation and burst into tears. My housemate is see-sawing between being worried and shocked. Bless him.

Little niggle: Aimee. Unless you're meaning Amie (ie French for friend). And you've stopped using the caps on the reader-jargon. xx

moonchildfic September 7 2011, 21:35:35 UTC

I actually don't know which realization you had. There are about three possible ones from this.

Thanks, I'll fix it.

moonchildfic September 8 2011, 01:06:45 UTC

Fixed! (echo isn't capatalized because it isn't actually reader-jargon it's a description (litterally Eliot is hearing an echo of a heart beat but I think I caught the other jargon). Thanks for the free-beta!

As for the realisation was it the "little soul" bit?

I'm tempted to ask you to email me what this supposed revelation was in the interest of not spoiling but also to make sure I don't have hints pointing in all the wrong directions.

Please?