Ugly Betty: The Barmaid in Tight Jeans (Wilhelmina, Hilda, Alexis)

Feb 01, 2008 23:58

Written for halfamoon: 14 Days of Celebrating Women.

Title: The Barmaid in Tight Jeans
Author: voleuse
Fandom: Ugly Betty
Characters: Wilhelmina, Hilda, Alexis
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: A warpath of sorts for every wrong ever wronged us.
Notes: Vague spoilers for 2.04

492 words )

challenge: halfamoon, ugly betty

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raptor47 February 4 2008, 16:06:29 UTC
This is beautiful, a wonderful glimpse of all three characters.

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moodfic February 13 2008, 00:51:19 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

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moodfic February 13 2008, 00:51:30 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

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vespertanmer February 6 2008, 01:58:11 UTC
This is so good. Quite possibly the best example of character exploration through interconnected drabbles that I've ever read. All of them were so insightful.

My favorite phrase is "...make-up, hasty and perfect". It's just a perfect turn of phrase that captures Hilda's personality so succinctly.

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moodfic February 13 2008, 00:51:47 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! Thank you!

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taskir February 9 2008, 14:49:26 UTC
This is excellent work. Wonderful job of charaterization in such a short space.

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moodfic February 13 2008, 00:51:55 UTC
Thank you so much!

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sheepfairy February 11 2008, 19:36:53 UTC
Oh, this is fantastic! You manage to say so much about the characters in such a short space, and I especially love the section about Wilhelmina and how much she managed to change herself.

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moodfic February 13 2008, 00:52:08 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

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