Another ANnie comment!wornflannelsoulDecember 17 2005, 23:41:20 UTC
To further aide you in your paper writing process here are the comments left to you by your fellow peer editors (Feel free to ignore..i usually do unless it's you leaving them. Ohhh I'm pretentious! Just kidding)
Peer Editor One: -Overall great essay -Add more detail on the personalities of the "greats" -Very funny!
Peer Editor 2: -Great intro and body paragraphs -It seems like you made "the Greats" really short...like you wanted to finish quickly. Make it more detailed. Insert Smiley face. -Conclusion??
Me: Very humorous...glad to see I'm not the only satirical asswipe in our class (not that you are...your sarcasm makes me smile alittle...since you are actually able to use it and not suck) Again a few more examples maybe...throw your own life in their such as "Last tuesday Mr.Cook (a badass) consumed my 3 month old cousin...he had a small baby leg hanging out of his mouth while he lectured on the reconstruction...i found it somewhat detrimental to my sanity. -Conclusion...fuck it if you don't want one. Tis no matter to me. Formats are lame AND FOR THE WEAK!
Peer Editor One:
-Overall great essay
-Add more detail on the personalities of the "greats"
-Very funny!
Peer Editor 2:
-Great intro and body paragraphs
-It seems like you made "the Greats" really short...like you wanted to finish quickly. Make it more detailed. Insert Smiley face.
-Conclusion??
Me:
Very humorous...glad to see I'm not the only satirical asswipe in our class (not that you are...your sarcasm makes me smile alittle...since you are actually able to use it and not suck)
Again a few more examples maybe...throw your own life in their such as "Last tuesday Mr.Cook (a badass) consumed my 3 month old cousin...he had a small baby leg hanging out of his mouth while he lectured on the reconstruction...i found it somewhat detrimental to my sanity.
-Conclusion...fuck it if you don't want one. Tis no matter to me. Formats are lame AND FOR THE WEAK!
Good paper Katie Rose...Kudos I say!
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and i do by nature ignore the darling peer editor comments. not like they'd ever know...
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