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Also,
About the poem. You are free to disagree with me, but I feel that in your second to last stanza you actually get somewhere a little profound, that you really do belong to modernity, and I like that. I think, by going back to the sentiments of the rest of the poem, you cheapen that realization, and lose the growth that makes the poem an interesting one.
Just my opinion!
*hearts*
About the poem. You are free to disagree with me, but I feel that in your second to last stanza you actually get somewhere a little profound, that you really do belong to modernity, and I like that. I think, by going back to the sentiments of the rest of the poem, you cheapen that realization, and lose the growth that makes the poem an interesting one.
Just my opinion!
*hearts*