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Sep 04, 2006 09:40

Today's going to be rough ( Read more... )

some things don't stop hurting

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moocow1985 September 5 2006, 15:40:45 UTC
It's grammatically correct.

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anonymous September 7 2006, 21:25:08 UTC
No, it's not.

I've made corrections:

Talked to my advisor about changing majors, and she was really helpful and supportive, and I am going to change the chem major to a chem minor, but that doesn't mean that I'm done with chemistry forever, because I'm not, but this year is going to involve much less death than last year.

-C

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moocow1985 September 7 2006, 22:52:10 UTC
Thank you for your handy commas. (I can't tell if you changed anything else.)

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anonymous September 8 2006, 15:31:04 UTC
Don't mention it.

(It was just the commas - I thought about emphasizing them in some ways, but then I remembered that I don't know how to use html. Whoops.)

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