Noooooooo make up love making?jenny1671March 20 2011, 04:45:21 UTC
Awwwwwwwwww I wanted some hot steamy love making to happen and you ended it. Now I have to wait another 7days UGGG I am not sure I can wait that long, going through withdrawals and its not a pretty picture. LOL! Thanks for your story. I wish it went on forever. I could keep reading infinitely.
Re: Noooooooo make up love making?montmorencyMarch 20 2011, 05:15:17 UTC
Heh. You've figured out my pattern, kind of. It takes a certain amount of time for the next bit to form. I'm not good at sex scenes, my forte is humor and maybe angst. Thanks!
Re: Noooooooo make up love making?jenny1671March 21 2011, 01:40:15 UTC
Well I enjoyed your lovemaking scenes more than your angst. I read them more than twice as I recall. I do prefer if they were face to face and gazing into each others eyes with a depth of feeling so incredible the written word will hardly do it justice, when they intensely express their affection for each other. :D
Re: Noooooooo make up love making?montmorencyMarch 21 2011, 14:09:17 UTC
Good point - angst can be hard to read because it's so emotional and the emotions are alarming or unhappy. Yet I find that the angst makes the rest of it so much better. :) Seriously, I am in awe of other writers who are so much better than I am. I'm happy if I can make the reader laugh or feel an emotion just for a second.
Is the next part written yet? Its Sunday nightjenny1671March 28 2011, 01:30:16 UTC
I am so addicted like watching a series on TV only its your story I'm reading week to week. I am waiting anxiously for the next part hoping its hot and steamy and Tommy comes to terms. You have a fan here :D
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