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montellico

grab your dick and double-click

Dec 12, 2011 22:04

title: grab your dick and double-click
pairing(s): onkey
rating: pg-15
wordcount: ~2600
summary: Kibum has a fantastic ass. Jinki wants to hit that.
a/n: continuation of that other piece of crack, from back when I liked to write non-AU fic. I also have it linked down below in the actual fic, lol, at roughly where it takes place, timewise. This whole ( Read more... )

onkey, shinee

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ittybittydaiyu December 13 2011, 09:07:06 UTC

Agreed lol

montellico December 14 2011, 00:43:34 UTC

haha glad you enjoyed it :)
thank you for reading!

neneksihir December 13 2011, 09:44:49 UTC

I-i g-guess... I want to pee *runs to the toilet* :))))

tokki24 December 13 2011, 12:41:37 UTC

O.My.Goodness!! Ahahahahahaaaaa..
Seriously!! This is the 1st fic that makes me shrieking n laughing n can't help to repeatedly scream from the beginning til the end..
It's just sooo funny yet hawty at the same time.. The three evil dongsaeng n the innocent (if I can't say densely curious) OnKey are totally success making my stomach n cheeks hurt.. LOL!!
I can't even read this when I'm outside cz I seriously can't hold my laughter, it's hard.. XD
This is gonna be my fav fic!! *save in my folder* :p
Thanks for sharing n makin me laugh!!
~<3

montellico December 14 2011, 00:45:56 UTC

ahaha i'm glad you liked it! thanks so much for reading :)

suki375 December 13 2011, 13:18:52 UTC

"Is there something wrong with my outfit? Oh my God, is my underwear showing?" He cranes his neck to scrutinize the seat of his pants, lifting his shirt to reveal a strip of pale flesh above the line of his tight, tight skinny jeans.
form this on i just died!!!!!! awesome!!!
I totally loved all three drabbles and is the sequel for the other one comming up?? you were thinking about it..

montellico December 14 2011, 00:48:00 UTC

thank you for reading! glad you liked :)
and umm.. i don't have any more sequels planned for the moment.. i know i was thinking about it but i forgot what i was gonna write about lol :P

suki375 December 14 2011, 06:14:55 UTC

:p that's ok!!! This one makes up~ lol i love your writings!!!

montellico December 14 2011, 08:23:51 UTC

aw thank you! :)

theia88 December 14 2011, 02:19:51 UTC

i have to read the 'the internet is for -' first because i kinda missing the part there.. like i got confused when i read suddenly kibum asked onew if he could see his dick and onew just said ok that easy.. lol
omg i thought that this was going to be more than handjob omg why? LOL
but this is good, the trio jong2min are so hilarious.. you should write more..key's ass and dubulge are perfect match!

montellico December 14 2011, 03:09:12 UTC

haha yeah.. i know it's confusing, sorry about that lol..
and i can't really write smut orz
but thank you! :)