Beta needed for looong genderswap
I crossposted this request to spn_betas.
Title: All My Love
Genre: Humor, drama, action, wincest, genderswap
Pairings or Characters: Dean/girl!Sam, Dean/Sam
Type of beta you'd like: Continuity, clarity, sneaky typos
Length: 34,000 words, divided into four chapters of roughly 8500 words each. WIP! Practically 100% finished! But we all say that.
Short Summary: A sequel to Whole Lotta Love. In the thirteenth most haunted place in the world, Sam turns into a girl and becomes obsessed with water pressure. NC-17 rating.
I began this around the time of Heart, and I've been Kripked every which way but up. None of the Kripke -- Kripekers? -- were fatal, though.
I tried to subvert a couple of the genderswap cliches; you can judge if it works.
What I really appreciate from a beta: suggestions for streamlining. Point out redundancies, whether they are a single word slowing things down, or several pages.
I also appreciate speed, which I know is unreasonable. My betas have always gotten the job done in about 48 hours. I hope to post chapters every four or five days.
Chapter one, 9,000 words, is ready for beta-ing. If you'd like to read it before committing, that is fine. I know a fic of this length is a lot of work. Reading Whole Lotta Love (length 4,000 words) first would probably be a good idea, too.
Title: All My Love
Genre: Humor, drama, action, wincest, genderswap
Pairings or Characters: Dean/girl!Sam, Dean/Sam
Type of beta you'd like: Continuity, clarity, sneaky typos
Length: 34,000 words, divided into four chapters of roughly 8500 words each. WIP! Practically 100% finished! But we all say that.
Short Summary: A sequel to Whole Lotta Love. In the thirteenth most haunted place in the world, Sam turns into a girl and becomes obsessed with water pressure. NC-17 rating.
I began this around the time of Heart, and I've been Kripked every which way but up. None of the Kripke -- Kripekers? -- were fatal, though.
I tried to subvert a couple of the genderswap cliches; you can judge if it works.
What I really appreciate from a beta: suggestions for streamlining. Point out redundancies, whether they are a single word slowing things down, or several pages.
I also appreciate speed, which I know is unreasonable. My betas have always gotten the job done in about 48 hours. I hope to post chapters every four or five days.
Chapter one, 9,000 words, is ready for beta-ing. If you'd like to read it before committing, that is fine. I know a fic of this length is a lot of work. Reading Whole Lotta Love (length 4,000 words) first would probably be a good idea, too.