Mononoke fic/art-athon - fic/art post - CLOSED

Aug 08, 2008 10:22


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MS, OS, and Kayo; G/PG; Grief woodburner August 8 2008, 15:06:10 UTC
An old woman becomes young again, right before his eyes. The wrinkles of skin melt into a smooth surface, supple and dark; her voice changes, stretches, the cracks and infirmities washed away from the vibrance it once held.

"I guess I just couldn't forget, huh?" she says, looking almost embarassed. "I didn't mean to cling on like that. I just - I wanted to say, just once, 'let me go with you.'"

"I thought you wanted love," he says. "A husband. Children."

"Yes. Yes, I did. And I had them. But you weren't there."

"I could not have given you those things."

She laughs, her eyes glistening. "Oh, I know that. Even then, I knew that. It's why I never said it. What girl wants to go traipsing about the country looking for murderous spirits?" She laughs again, sniffs, wipes a tear from her cheek. A smell of burnt cinnamon - she knows without looking what stands behind her. If she closes her eyes but a moment, she fancies she feels a brown hand glowing with gold, reaching out to touch her hair, gently, so gently; but it is probably only a fancy.

"It hasn't been a bad life," she says. "I wasn't unhappy. I just... couldn't forget."

"You could not die."

"Not until I saw you again." She smiles. "It's all right. I'm sorry I had to trouble you over such a little thing."

"Not little," he says, reaching out to touch her cheek as the sword falls, silently. "Not little."

An old woman frees her last breath as his painted lips press to her brow, the creases like a map of time beneath them. Slowly, he straightens, lifts his medicine box onto his back, and leaves.

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Re: MS, OS, and Kayo; G/PG; Grief magicnoire August 8 2008, 17:21:37 UTC
WAH!

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Re: MS, OS, and Kayo; G/PG; Grief woodburner August 8 2008, 20:14:18 UTC
This had been sitting in my head for literally months but I never bothered to write it because it was too fucking depressing. XD;;

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Re: MS, OS, and Kayo; G/PG; Grief dogemperor August 9 2008, 04:34:22 UTC
Depressing isn't necessarily *bad* IMHO--if it can be done right, it can be sad but good at the same time, if that makes sense. (And yes, for the record, this qualifies quite well in this.)

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Re: MS, OS, and Kayo; G/PG; Grief woodburner August 9 2008, 04:36:51 UTC
Well sure, depressing things can be good, but I have a personal distaste for depressing things in general, you see. XD;

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Re: MS, OS, and Kayo; G/PG; Grief grendelity August 8 2008, 19:24:05 UTC
Wah wah. This is lovely. [And you're an angel for organizing this in general, just sayin'.]

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Re: MS, OS, and Kayo; G/PG; Grief woodburner August 8 2008, 20:16:51 UTC
Thank you! (Small price to pay to bribe everyone into doing fanstuffs! >D)

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Re: MS, OS, and Kayo; G/PG; Grief dogemperor August 9 2008, 00:17:38 UTC
YOU FINALLY GOADED MY ARSE INTO IT :D (And the world probably regrets this now, lol)

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Re: MS, OS, and Kayo; G/PG; Grief bladderwrack August 8 2008, 21:32:28 UTC
WEEP D:

(It -- it's lovely ~ ;_;)

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Re: MS, OS, and Kayo; G/PG; Grief dogemperor August 9 2008, 00:03:25 UTC
This is beautiful...sad, but beautiful, and all too believable. :'3

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Re: MS, OS, and Kayo; G/PG; Grief dawninhell August 10 2008, 20:48:32 UTC
So sweet and so sad!
Love you for organizing this, cause now there's so much good stuff to read and see!

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