...I love this. So freaking much. I don't think I've commented yet but I've been following it since your first chapter and alksjdlhfasd. SO GOOD. I really like your writing style, the way you show so many scenes over a period of time, so we can actually see Zoro adapting to his "new" life and how he's coping with remembering certain things. And your characterizations are spot on with everyone! Sanji, Zoro, Luffy- I love it. A LOT. EXCELLENT JOB, looking forward to more!!
So close but so far away. My stomach clenched when Zoro remembered the barrel scene, and them speaking out loud their dreams. Just. Wow. I love those scenes in the manga, where they put their foot on the barrels, or when they all put a fist in the air, revealing their X's, and so on. Just awesome.
I love the slow progression of this fic, too. Zoro doesn't remember, doesn't really care to. He's having problems adjusting to the fact that he has a family now (and what else is nakama, but friends and family rolled into one?), that he's been having these dreams (will he realize they're memories?) and that he wants to see Sanji happy.
YOU WRITE SO WELL, I'M JEALOUS. This fic is seriously addicted, and I'm going to keep my fingers crossed that we get more soon!
lol They're the best. I always get chills from the amount of awesome. XD
You're so welcome! It's going just right! Any faster and it'd seem rushed. It's just amazing.
Yes! Practice really is a good way to improve. I don't write -- and post -- often enough I guess. Everyone always looks at someone else's writing and wishes it was their own, it seems. *shrug*
I... Just started reading this and I already completely love it. This is so fucking SAD and it hurts so much to see Sanji like that, mourning a person who's not dead but gone all the same, and not understanding or accepting that of himself. I can't help but think it's much worse to loose someone who you have to live with, see, cook for, interact with every. Single. Day. And they just don't remember you, while you know so much... And can't say a thing. It's just so sad... And than there's Zoro, who is finally starting to catch on and understand and who now starts wishing he doesn't exist, in a way...
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Zoro is so... <3 and poor Sanji. I enjoyed the Zoro + Luffy conversation too. Nice.
Can't wait for more.
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I'll try to update again soon XD
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I'm newly inspired to write like crazy XD
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I love the slow progression of this fic, too. Zoro doesn't remember, doesn't really care to. He's having problems adjusting to the fact that he has a family now (and what else is nakama, but friends and family rolled into one?), that he's been having these dreams (will he realize they're memories?) and that he wants to see Sanji happy.
YOU WRITE SO WELL, I'M JEALOUS. This fic is seriously addicted, and I'm going to keep my fingers crossed that we get more soon!
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I was worried about how slow this is going, I'm glad it's not dragging too much. thanks!
Ah *sheepish* I always look at everyone else's writing and wish I could write that well. But hopefully with practice ^-^
thank u!
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You're so welcome! It's going just right! Any faster and it'd seem rushed. It's just amazing.
Yes! Practice really is a good way to improve. I don't write -- and post -- often enough I guess. Everyone always looks at someone else's writing and wishes it was their own, it seems. *shrug*
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I can't help but think it's much worse to loose someone who you have to live with, see, cook for, interact with every. Single. Day. And they just don't remember you, while you know so much... And can't say a thing.
It's just so sad...
And than there's Zoro, who is finally starting to catch on and understand and who now starts wishing he doesn't exist, in a way...
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sorry for the sad T.T
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Those dreams are your memories Zoro! You're so close to realizing it! Come on! You can do it!!!
Aw! Zoro wanting Sanji happy it just makes me melt a little inside..
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me too!
and I'm glad u liked the hand!sex XD *runs away*
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