2083 [part 2/7]; Sam, Ruby, Nick, Lucifer; AU, Gen, R

Mar 28, 2012 19:52

title: 2083
author: monicawoe
wordcount: ~3800 total (2500 this chapter)
characters: Sam, Ruby, Meg, Brady, Nick, Lucifer
warnings: some violence, gore and technobabble
notes: (A big thank you to my wonderful beta quickreaver )
summary: written for scifi_spn for this prompt:Sam Winchester, the boy with the demon bio-tech. He knows it's wrong, that it's sick, but he just can't stop. ( Read more... )

sam, 2083, lucifer, supernatural

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roxymissrose March 29 2012, 02:39:40 UTC
This continues to be fascinating! This Lucifer is just as smooth and oily as our version, Nick's disintegration is even more creepy. I love this back-story on events that may or may not have happened this way. I'm thinking that the coming meeting between the brothers will not exactly be handshakes and hugs.

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monicawoe March 29 2012, 22:49:57 UTC
Glad you're enjoying it! It's waaaay fun to write too ; )

I liked re-imagining Lucifer as an AI. It's an interesting translation of angels.'

I love this back-story on events that may or may not have happened this way. I'm thinking that the coming meeting between the brothers will not exactly be handshakes and hugs.

Very insightful statements!

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monicawoe March 29 2012, 22:50:25 UTC
Thank you so much!

I'm glad you're having fun reading it - it is really fun to write!

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quickreaver March 29 2012, 04:05:37 UTC
Hell, I need to go see Dean! This is too cool...(I'm so lucky to get previews!)

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monicawoe March 29 2012, 22:50:47 UTC
Dean is going to be very interesting ; )

(I am glad you are previewing!)

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tifaching March 31 2012, 02:35:48 UTC
"Dean is going to be very interesting ; )" I cannot wait to see your version of Dean. If he's half as fascinating as your Sam, I'll be a very happy Tif.

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jagfanlj March 29 2012, 07:09:24 UTC
He suddenly felt the need to leave, to run without looking back.

That's how I felt while reading this. Fortunately, I find myself unable to turn away from its shivery, shuddery, awfulness.

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monicawoe March 29 2012, 22:52:09 UTC
Thank you!
It's odd- I've always liked horror, but I'm always surprised by how much fun it is to try to convey the finer details of something as creepy as Lucifer.

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amberdreams March 29 2012, 09:05:08 UTC
There is a nice sense of doom building here, and I loved the description of Lucifer's liquid silver eyes and Nick's deterioration.

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monicawoe March 29 2012, 22:53:13 UTC
Thank you! It is really fun re-imagining angels (and their vessels) in this setting ; )

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