This is wonderful and breathless and just perfect!!!!
Thank you - two very small words that are now full to bursting. *^_^*
I love how Sam feels them... but ignores, shrugs off, gets distracted.
Sam stood, shaking only slightly and walked over to Bobby. He shrugged his shoulders and felt the weight of heavy, enormous wings shifting. He'd been ignoring them, hoping they'd go away like every other hallucination, but now he understood. They were real, they were real, they were real.
Perfect. I love the rhythm and the timbre of the words and the awakening of Sam to the truth.
This was actually really cool to write. Not something I normally write about, but actually a really cool thing to ponder. I hope you didn't mind that Sam's wings were more light than shadow, it just seemed appropriate, given who his angel is. Plus, Raphael had lightning wings, so I think the archangels would have something different anyway ; )
This is wonderful and breathless and just perfect!!!!
Thank you - two very small words that are now full to bursting. *^_^*
I love how Sam feels them... but ignores, shrugs off, gets distracted.
Sam stood, shaking only slightly and walked over to Bobby. He shrugged his shoulders and felt the weight of heavy, enormous wings shifting. He'd been ignoring them, hoping they'd go away like every other hallucination, but now he understood. They were real, they were real, they were real.
Perfect. I love the rhythm and the timbre of the words and the awakening of Sam to the truth.
So, so right.
<3
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::hugs::
This was actually really cool to write. Not something I normally write about, but actually a really cool thing to ponder. I hope you didn't mind that Sam's wings were more light than shadow, it just seemed appropriate, given who his angel is. Plus, Raphael had lightning wings, so I think the archangels would have something different anyway ; )
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In fact your story inspired me to do some photoshop art!
http://pics.livejournal.com/datenshiblue/pic/000as8qy
*grins and hugs to death! (Sam can revive you ;D)*
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I love when words inspire art and vice-versa! Or in this case your words inspired my words inspired your art, \o/
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