With A Little Help From My Friends

[dylan_dufresne]

Title: With A Little Help From My Friends - 3
Author: dylan_dufresne
Pairing: BB/DM
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Long distance love, surprises, and a reluctant revelation.
Feedback: Would be greatly appreciated as it’s my drug of choice. Many thanks to my wonderful beta, frojane for pointing out my mistakes.
Special Thanks: To loki_girl for the exquisite banner that she has created

Comments

[ex_rogerpit]

Another fantastic chapter, Dylan. There were a couple of small things that need correcting, though:

Dom gnaws on his lower lap as he hangs up the phone and lays it back down on the mattress. That should be "lip", not "lap". I don't think Dom is quite THAT flexible.

Billy feels his control break free of his slippery grasp, and before he can warn his lover, hot pulses of his intimate warmth is flowing over Dom's tongue. That should be "are flowing".

I admire the way you portray these two - Dom leaving his shirt in Billy's suitcase as a reminder of him, and Billy leaving London early to come back to Dom. Little things, but so meaningful. I guess this means we'll have to wait until Monday for the next chapter? Or will you be posting something over the weekend?

[dylan_dufresne]

How do you know Dom isn't that flexible? Hmmm? *snicker*

Next chapter will be posted on Monday.

[rainbowcobweb]

Mmmmmmm phonesex. And mmmmmm actual sex. :D

And the kisses on the car window got me. Oh and Billy coming home early as well! <3

Roll on Monday, hehe.

[dylan_dufresne]

I think this is only the 2nd time I've written phone sex. Odd, because it was fun to do.

Awww, I'm glad you liked the kisses on the window. I thought it was sweet when I thought of it.

Hee! Yes, more on Monday. :)

[crsty1961]

Awe I don't think my hubby misses me like that, so it's sweet to read about it happening to some one else. Thanks this was sexy sweet!

[dylan_dufresne]

They're still getting used to all the new lovey feelings, and that makes them extra sweet. Thank you very much. Happy you enjoyed.

[shelley6441]

Fabulous! And I'm looking forward to Dom's visit to the therapist. Have a great weekend :D

[dylan_dufresne]

Awwww, thank you! Pleased you enjoyed. See you on Monday!

[imtherightstuff]

Oh man I can't wait for the next installment! Each chapter gets better than the next... I really love this Billy/Dom universe, and how you have revealed things about their characters over the course of the chapters (thank god for not having too much exposition!)...

You've got another big big fan!

[dylan_dufresne]

Thank you so much. I'm rather fond of this verse myself, which is why I gave into my Muse and wrote a sequel. As for exposition, there's lots to come in that department.

Yay! I ♥ having a new fan.