Title: With A Little Help From My Friends - 3
Author:
dylan_dufresne Pairing: BB/DM
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Long distance love, surprises, and a reluctant revelation.
Feedback: Would be greatly appreciated as it’s my drug of choice. Many thanks to my wonderful beta,
frojane for pointing out my mistakes.
Special Thanks: To
loki_girl for the exquisite banner that she has created
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Dom gnaws on his lower lap as he hangs up the phone and lays it back down on the mattress. That should be "lip", not "lap". I don't think Dom is quite THAT flexible.
Billy feels his control break free of his slippery grasp, and before he can warn his lover, hot pulses of his intimate warmth is flowing over Dom's tongue. That should be "are flowing".
I admire the way you portray these two - Dom leaving his shirt in Billy's suitcase as a reminder of him, and Billy leaving London early to come back to Dom. Little things, but so meaningful. I guess this means we'll have to wait until Monday for the next chapter? Or will you be posting something over the weekend?
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Next chapter will be posted on Monday.
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And the kisses on the car window got me. Oh and Billy coming home early as well! <3
Roll on Monday, hehe.
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Awww, I'm glad you liked the kisses on the window. I thought it was sweet when I thought of it.
Hee! Yes, more on Monday. :)
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You've got another big big fan!
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Yay! I ♥ having a new fan.
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