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Jul 04, 2006 11:32

(posted on my personal journal last week)

Billy/Dom
NC-17

Want it... )

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aire_blair July 5 2006, 14:02:08 UTC
I meant to say this when I first read it, but I really, really like your DominantDom.

Really.

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feelforfaith July 7 2006, 16:26:51 UTC
"I'll fuck you when we get home," Dom says, his lips wet and his breath hot against Billy's ear. "I'll let you undress me with your teeth and suck me, and then I'll let you get yourself ready for me. I'll watch you fuck yourself with your fingers, get all hot and wet for me, stretch yourself out until you're ready."

Dom talking dirty does it for me. Totally. :D.

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msilverstar July 16 2006, 01:54:06 UTC
Oh this is good, you pack so much into such a small space: their dynamics, Dom stepping up and giving Billy what he needs, the details of how Billy looks and feels, wanting and needing so much. It curls my toes, even the third time I read it.

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