ReitaxRuki - Gazette - Please - Oneshot

[momonao]

Title: Please
Chapters: Oneshot
Author: momonao
Genre: Angst, romance
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Pairings: ReitaxRuki
Disclaimers: Don't own.
Summary: Ruki's PoV
Comments:Short really, and not overly pleased with it. Was debating whether or not to most. Constructive criticism appreciated ^_^

Comments

[devilish_mari]

that was so sad ;o;

still, it was so prettyyyyyy~~~~
*o*

i rly liked this <3
many hearts to you (Y)

[momonao]

Thank you :)

[shizuka_no_yume]

<3

kind of sad, kind of pretty. <3

[momonao]

Thank you!

[anonymous]

Awww pretty pretty pretty* chants on in her head*

[momonao]

Hehe, thanks ^_^

[sabersenshi]

I'm glad you decided to post it.

I like it. Alot.

It's sweet..in an angsty way.

Which is a good combination, I think.

Can't give you any criticism....I don't think you need to improve anything.

Write more...please?
(and post 'em, too.)

[momonao]

Hee thank you ^_^

& I will :3

[hikumurakami]

O_O

...

T_T Waaaah!!!!

I love it...!!

The way you wrote it make me really feel like I was feeling all those things...

T_T I felt weird with the ending...like...happy...but sad at the same time...

Nice story!!

You should keep writing!!! ^-^

[momonao]

Thank you!
I really tried to make everything Ruki was feeling come out without being over the top about it. I've read over it some more, and I'm a little more pleased with it now :3

And thanks again ^_^