Working the Street~ Episode 10

Jan 11, 2010 16:21

TITLE : Working the Street~ Episode 10

AUTHOR : My dear Senpai in other fandom, and me for some revision.

GENRE: Shonen-Ai, AU.

PAIRING(S) : ChiiTaro (main), TakaChii (One-sided) and some random pairings.

RATING : R or above, I’m not sure.

WORD COUNT : 1873.

WARNING : An extremely-foul-mouth Chii, mentions of abuse, massive sexual contents, some of adult ( Read more... )

morimoto ryutaro, my fanfiction, rated r, multi-chapter, takaki yuuya, chinen yuuri

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kodochalover January 11 2010, 09:27:58 UTC
“No one’s cuter than me,"

VERY true ^^

“Because she doesn’t know she’s my girl.”... “Oh... for fuck’s sake...” Chinen said and rolled his eyes. “Just some stupid crush. She’s your crush, not your girl, asshole.”

LMAO!! Chinen's use of swear words is hilarious xD
i just love it ^^ it definitely adds more fun to the plot~ and Ryutaro really needs to stop calling her "his girl" lol xD

“Girls like flowers...”

“I don’t like flowers!..”

KAWAII CHII!!!
responding as if he was a girl xD
how freaking adorable ^^!!!

“Yuuyan, dealer. Ryutaro, bum. Me, hooker. All introductions have been made, right?”

lol xD so honest!
its funny though~
god i love Chii~
and Takaki is introduced with a kakkoii personality :D
hes HOTT ^^

“Come on, Ryutaro! You can’t not notice it! It’s midwinter and his face is all red... like he’s sweating. I bet he is. He’s picturing us both in bed.”

ewwwwwww dirty old man D:
its hard to believe that there are really old people out there with these kid fetishes D:

I wouldnt mind if it was Ryu-chan or Chii picturing each other in bed

“I gotta do it, Ryuu-chan... or we’re gonna lose the stone...” Chinen said and shrugged self-securely. “Don’t worry, Ryuu-chan. You’ll get to see me in action. I’m quite proud of my expertise...”

ehhhhhhh?!
chii you dont HAVE to do it D:
but i really cant wait to see what happens next :D!!!
i know for sure I'll enjoy it though~

hehe i just replied to your comment before asking you to update lol
and when i refreshed your page, there was an update xD!!!
silly me~

anyways!!!
IM SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED!!!!!
I freakin' enjoyed it all ^^
soo good ^^
your writing makes Chii and Ryu's characters so lovable lol ^^
THANK YOU SO MUCH :D!!!

I hope you update soon ^^

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momoiro71 January 18 2010, 06:14:02 UTC
yay~~
i'm so glad you enjoyed my fic...
thank you for commenting, dear..
*hugs*

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