Ummmm . . . my muse may be back . . .

Nov 19, 2008 20:58

(For some reason, I'm having a heck of a time getting this to go under a cut . . . )

I think my muse has returned.

I have written a teensy little fic.

I need help 'cause I haven't written in YEARS and I'm super rusty.

I'm hoping this'll actually go somewhere, but I need help getting it there.

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help, fanfic

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wanderingsmith November 20 2008, 04:05:54 UTC
ah? a returning Return muse? do tell more..

I like Elizabeth, could feel her repressed energy and self-frustration echoing as though from far away... is this the first that puppy has dared to come by? how has he been?

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momm2five November 20 2008, 14:21:32 UTC
Thanks - I think Elizabeth will be the hardest for me. I'm so opposite her in most things.

This is the first time he's been around since she was released from the SGC infirmary. He's never been to her home. He's been so busy in Atlantis, they've only talked briefly and not face-to-face.

I was thinking he made up the mandatory leave - it was really him demanding leave so he could see her. He's missed her. He also knows from experience that she'll beat herself up and hide. So he's there to make sure she's ok and get her moving again. He wants her back in Atlantis or at least in the SGC.

*sigh* It's there, in my head, but I'm not as articulate as I was 8 years ago . . .

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wanderingsmith November 20 2008, 14:33:47 UTC
sounds good. lonely puppy I like.. do we get more backstory trickling in too?

locked words are frustrating. I know. keep fighting the wall!

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momm2five November 20 2008, 14:58:09 UTC
I'm hoping to work in what happened to get her back to earth. And how John's been while she's gone.

I just hope I'm not too ambitious here.

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wanderingsmith November 20 2008, 15:03:53 UTC
hang on tight and keep doing any little bit a day you can... lol, not that I'm one to talk I gues -rolls eyes at self-

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