Drabble: Rose/Scorpius

[mollywheezy]

Title: A Private Celebration
Words: 252
Rated: PG-13
A/N: Written for Rose/Scorpius Week at nextgen_drabble.

Comments

[heart_eyes23]

Awww, that is terribly sweet. I fully enjoyed it. I liked how we are led to believe maybe it's a very young couple we are witnessing, because of the silliness, only to discover that they've actually been together for fifty years.

Gives us all hope. ;)

One little thing: there's a line of dialogued that's not signaled as such. It should be,

"I fully intend to," Rose smiled as she took another sip. "But I think I'll enjoy it more if we unlink our arms." Rose extricated her arm from Scorpius', careful not to spill any of her champagne.

There's the opening (") missing in what you have. :D

[mollywheezy]

"I liked how we are led to believe maybe it's a very young couple we are witnessing, because of the silliness, only to discover that they've actually been together for fifty years."

Thank you! That's exactly what I intended. ;) I was thinking about all of the cute, older couples I know as I was writing this.

Thanks also for the correction. It's fixed now. ;D

[grandma_kate]

Charming. Old people can be romantic and silly. too. I think it helps if you start out that way.

[mollywheezy]

Thank you! And I completely agree. ;D

[drcjsnider]

Adore this... I reall love the idea of Rose/Scorpius growing old together...

[adjennaline]

I'm curious now. What are the names of their kids?? :)