Proof-reader and tv-show
Heyho, if somebody is reading this, I hope I get a reply to at least one of my questions.
Actually, at the beginning I thought I should just up my first story with all it's mistakes and hope, that somebody took pity - not on me but on the English language - and would reply with something like: "Stop! I will do it! But please, stop raping and abusing my language!"
But then I thought it would be better, if I just asked someone to be my proof reader, who can spell check my slightly disordered English and corrects expressions. Though I'm trying my best. Anyone willing to try it out for me?
The second thing:
When I was little I saw a TV-series with a boy in coma, who, in his coma-dream, experienced a lot of things. Or maybe it was just a movie, but if somebody knows what I'm talking about, please answer.
Thanks in advance
Moku
Actually, at the beginning I thought I should just up my first story with all it's mistakes and hope, that somebody took pity - not on me but on the English language - and would reply with something like: "Stop! I will do it! But please, stop raping and abusing my language!"
But then I thought it would be better, if I just asked someone to be my proof reader, who can spell check my slightly disordered English and corrects expressions. Though I'm trying my best. Anyone willing to try it out for me?
The second thing:
When I was little I saw a TV-series with a boy in coma, who, in his coma-dream, experienced a lot of things. Or maybe it was just a movie, but if somebody knows what I'm talking about, please answer.
Thanks in advance
Moku