A Fine Mess (implied Frodo/Sam) R 5/8

[moit_fics]

Title: A Fine Mess - Chapter 5/8
Author: Moit
Summary: After taking a walk, a pregnant Frodo finds himself at the mercy of a camp of rangers.
Rating: R
Pairing: implied Frodo/Sam
Genre: Drama
Warnings: Yaoi/Slash, mpreg, minor character death
Previous chapters here.

Comments

[claudia603]

oh no! I wonder what's wrong with Frodo! Why would his bump diminish!!!

Wheeeee! How great to have this at near the top of my flist when I came home!!! Hurray! :D

[moit]

*stares at you*

Srsly?

*cocks head to the side*

Was I that unclear?

Hmm.

*is worried now*

Frodo lost the baby.........

*drums the keyboard*

Should I state that explicitly?

[claudia603]

D'oh!!!! I am going to reread now! I'm sure it was obvious to everyone else! I thought he was having his period (while being pregnant, like some people do)...D:

[moit]

*rubs chin thoughtfully*

If it's really unclear that he's definitely having a miscarriage, let me know and I'll fix it. It just seemed really obvious to me? lol

[lijahlover]

What a sad chapter poor Frodo :(

[moit]

Things will get better, don't worry. *pats you*

[lovethosehobbit]

*Sob* Poor Frodo. He's lucky Aragorn was there to help him and showed up before he bled to death..loved this. Let's quick go see what happens next, ok?

[moit]

*wipes your tears*

I dunno that he would have bled to DEATH, but he definitely would have been in some serious pain.

Oh, I know what happens next... don't you? *evil grin*

Thanks for reading, dear!

[lovethosehobbit]

EEEEEEEEEEEEKKKK...you are EVIL!!