Title: Until the Last One Withers Pairing: Jessica/Tiffany, Sunny/Hyomin (if you squint) Rating: PG13 (for language and mature concepts) Word count: approx. 4300 ( Read more... )
once again, an Awesome piece by moirai
anonymous
July 17 2012, 05:31:15 UTC
its interesting that one can find life boring. jessica was pretty selfish not to realize that everyone has there limits, and tiffany can't just love her without return. Life may have already bored jessica out, but if she doesn't hold onto tiffany, tiffany still has a life to fill.
Re: Are you the Anon person from What We Both Are?
anonymous
July 17 2012, 15:03:19 UTC
Yes, i am the Anon from What We Both Are but you'll have to guess who i am :P Hints(that may or may not be helpful): I have an account on soshified i friended you on soshified and i have recently visited your profile
Hey! Thanks so much for writing this! ^^ I really enjoyed this story as a whole, though, if I wanted to be nit picky, I saw a little here and there that made me frown a little. You don't have a beta-reader, so it's perfectly excusable. And regardless, I found Jessica and Tiffany's chemistry in this piece to be very endearing despite the situation. I hope to see another story from you soon!
I reread it last night and found some parts annoying (e.g. the excessive repetition) and stumbled across some grammar and punctuation mistakes. I'm not sure if we're talking about the same errors, though *gives you a penny for your thoughts* (:
Sorry I'm late. ext_1304837July 17 2012, 10:11:50 UTC
Needed to go out earlier>_< I need to go out to have dinner again soon so I'll just leave a short one this time.
Selfish Jessica Jung .v. My Miyoungie is so poor :(:( Luckily, my stupid bias realized her mistake and went back to Tiffany. Tiffany is just so nice in this story:( Well in real life too.
Again. You wrote one of my favourite action or whatever - giving fake flowers and say they love someone until the last one withers or die. I find this sweet>________< And Jessica just dumped Hara because of Tiffany hahahahaha. Poor Hara~_~ Anyway, I love this... Actually I REALLY REALLY love all of your fics... Just trust me okay? Be comfortable around me too.
No need to apologize!moiraizJuly 17 2012, 22:05:10 UTC
Seriously though, why are you apologizing? Just stop by and read it whenever you're free. I hope you had a good dinner haha (:
Tiffany was kind of selfish in this story (not really). If she was "so nice" she would've stayed by Jessica's side even if she wasn't getting anything in return. But you know, even nice people have their limits.
Yes, I like being very cliche and cheesy! Thank you, Kiddie! :D
I'm surprised you noticed.moiraizJuly 17 2012, 22:26:32 UTC
Yes, this was on AsianFanfics. It was posted by me on my friend's (pinkpsycho's) account under the name "Let's Set the World on Fire." This story was updated as an on-going until the part "Your true colors shine so brightly. They’re blinding, yet so beautiful… just like you." When my friend became too busy, I decided it was best to just finish this as a one-shot and took it down from AsianFanfics. I also took down the other story as well (FWB).
Re: I'm surprised you noticed.scratchdnote5July 19 2012, 15:48:53 UTC
Haha, I knew it! The part where Jessica was hiding the fact that she was seeing a psychiatrist triggered a memory. I liked the story the first time I read it and I was about to read it over when it disappeared. I'm glad it's up again and that you finished it as a one-shot.
Great one shot there! :) Janey here. :3 Pretty witty, Jessi... Plastic flowers don't wither... So you'll love Tiffany till the end. I like how you developed the story... It made me wonder what's the big deal with JeTi at first since Sooyoung clearly disapproved of their relationship. And then we find out bit by bit how Jessica constantly hurts Tiffany. This story is so lovely and so meaningful. Thanks for the wonderful read! ^^
HI JANEY UNNIR :DmoiraizJuly 17 2012, 22:33:16 UTC
I was actually looking up flower meanings to make this story extra cliche and cheesy, but somehow I ended up going with the plastic flowers thing haha xD
Sooyoung's only like that because she doesn't like seeing Tiffany constantly being hurt and doesn't have a single clue what Jessica's going through.
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jessica was pretty selfish not to realize that everyone has there limits, and tiffany can't just love her without return.
Life may have already bored jessica out, but if she doesn't hold onto tiffany, tiffany still has a life to fill.
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Thank you for reading and commenting! Comments equal motivation and fuel hehe ^_^
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but you'll have to guess who i am :P
Hints(that may or may not be helpful):
I have an account on soshified
i friended you on soshified
and i have recently visited your profile
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I really enjoyed this story as a whole, though, if I wanted to be nit picky, I saw a little here and there that made me frown a little. You don't have a beta-reader, so it's perfectly excusable.
And regardless, I found Jessica and Tiffany's chemistry in this piece to be very endearing despite the situation. I hope to see another story from you soon!
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Thank you for giving this story a chance! ^^
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I need to go out to have dinner again soon so I'll just leave a short one this time.
Selfish Jessica Jung .v. My Miyoungie is so poor :(:(
Luckily, my stupid bias realized her mistake and went back to Tiffany. Tiffany is just so nice in this story:( Well in real life too.
Again. You wrote one of my favourite action or whatever - giving fake flowers and say they love someone until the last one withers or die. I find this sweet>________< And Jessica just dumped Hara because of Tiffany hahahahaha. Poor Hara~_~
Anyway, I love this... Actually I REALLY REALLY love all of your fics... Just trust me okay? Be comfortable around me too.
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Tiffany was kind of selfish in this story (not really). If she was "so nice" she would've stayed by Jessica's side even if she wasn't getting anything in return. But you know, even nice people have their limits.
Yes, I like being very cliche and cheesy! Thank you, Kiddie! :D
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Thank you for reading? ^^
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Thank you for writing ^^
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Pretty witty, Jessi... Plastic flowers don't wither... So you'll love Tiffany till the end. I like how you developed the story... It made me wonder what's the big deal with JeTi at first since Sooyoung clearly disapproved of their relationship. And then we find out bit by bit how Jessica constantly hurts Tiffany. This story is so lovely and so meaningful. Thanks for the wonderful read! ^^
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Sooyoung's only like that because she doesn't like seeing Tiffany constantly being hurt and doesn't have a single clue what Jessica's going through.
Thank you for reading and commenting! :3
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