Cause, damn, he'd have to be nuts to say no to that! I mean, come on! I must have watched that whole shirtless pool ep fifty times! Shirtless and begging for it? Guh!
Nooooooo, no no no no no! Damn, what the hell happened to Gil? Since when is he so obviously stupid? He's usually the smart one! He CAN'T think that making Nicky unhappy is the way to go. You better fix this...and QUICK! *is unhappy*
At first, Greg doesn't know what is going on: "We don't know what he does have...One doctor was claiming an allergic reaction. Another wanted to slap a Post Traumatic Stress Disorder diagnosis on him." But now he knows all about the Sentinels, Guides, Shamans, and Nick and his futures as such? Did he get this just from reading the documentation Grissom brought over? Would Greg still be that jealous of Grissom?
In this chapter, Greg not only knows about it, information has come from his past. "I knew that Nick was a Sentinel." - then why did he risk having Nick diagnosed with PTSD? Why didn't he come clean with Gil and they work together?
Still like this story. Am interested in seeing where you are planning on taking it. Just needs some clarification, please.
::laughs:: Wow, someone actually called me on that...
In reply, I'll say that we only knew 'to this point' what Greg knew of what was happening due to what he was telling Grissom... Why assume that Greg, or Nick even, are without deceit?
And, yes, this will all be explained in the next few parts... Grissom, after all, would hardly accept such a conflict in evidence.
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*throws up hands*
Gah!!!
I need a drink.
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Cause, damn, he'd have to be nuts to say no to that! I mean, come on! I must have watched that whole shirtless pool ep fifty times! Shirtless and begging for it? Guh!
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Will fix. Promise.
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At first, Greg doesn't know what is going on: "We don't know what he does have...One doctor was claiming an allergic reaction. Another wanted to slap a Post Traumatic Stress Disorder diagnosis on him." But now he knows all about the Sentinels, Guides, Shamans, and Nick and his futures as such? Did he get this just from reading the documentation Grissom brought over? Would Greg still be that jealous of Grissom?
In this chapter, Greg not only knows about it, information has come from his past. "I knew that Nick was a Sentinel." - then why did he risk having Nick diagnosed with PTSD? Why didn't he come clean with Gil and they work together?
Still like this story. Am interested in seeing where you are planning on taking it. Just needs some clarification, please.
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In reply, I'll say that we only knew 'to this point' what Greg knew of what was happening due to what he was telling Grissom... Why assume that Greg, or Nick even, are without deceit?
And, yes, this will all be explained in the next few parts... Grissom, after all, would hardly accept such a conflict in evidence.
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