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[moffatt]

This is my first dabble in short fiction, so please bare with me here. And since I'm not in that Deadly Passions place, this is just something I started writing for the hell of it. Anyway.

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le plus doux au revoir
[ sweetest goodbyeHer heart was a mystery to him

Comments

[gil_doron]

It's good. You're no worse than I am. :)

[moffatt]

Thank you; and you aren't bad at all.
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[coldstar]

It didn't suck for me, I liked it, there was (this will sound so cheesy) but there was a 'moment' there...hi I'm Rei, lol.

^.^ keep writting Scotch.