Fic: Criminology 101 (3/?)

[moeexyz]

Fandom: Community
Title: Criminology 101
Character/Pairing(s): One sided Annie/Troy, past Jeff/Britta, and eventual Jeff/Annie.
Rating: PG
Summary: Mafia AU. Annie gets her introduction into Greendale's crime world, in the hopes that she can finally bag Troy Barnes.  Meanwhile, Jeff tries to keep things running smoothly while Pierce is busy, and he has

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[classicfreak]

I'm sure I shouldn't be feeling this feeling of excitement (or society says it's wrong at least) but you've done it again, you angel you.

JEFF YOUR GLEE AT THE BOMB MADE ME LOVE YOU
Annie, please kill someone to save Jeff, and then bone the shit out of him
That would be awesome
I can toads see Britt a building bombs, it kind of reminded me of Accross the Universe for a second there (esp. the song you were listening to)

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PERFECT!

[moeexyz]

Screw society. And thank you!

Annie's kill is coming up soon, though I can't promise any crazy mafia sextimes between Jeff and Annie ... mostly because I can't write smut. It would end up being all penis insert into vagina

DUUUUUDE, I love that movie! And Britta totally would be the extremist bomber type. XD

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[teruel_a_witch]

penis insert into vagina
Mwah, why not "insert item A into slot B"? xDDD I hear you,though, I couldn't write smut if my life depended on it (welll, if Community's life depended on it I'd rethink that but mine isn't that important) they say you need to write what you know, all I know is the stuff I'd learnt from fanfic, which isn't the most reliable source I imagine XD Though sexxin' does not need to be explicitly written to be hot, personally I like tasteful vague descriptions that resemble more of a brushstroke of a painter rather than a scale drawing of an engineer, leaving the rest to imaginationxD

[moeexyz]

all I know is the stuff I'd learnt from fanfic
That's the same for me as well. I'd try it, but I'd be afraid of it coming out all unrealistic, because the fuck do I know about sex? Especially wild mafia sex XD

I like tasteful vague descriptions that resemble more of a brushstroke of a painter rather than a scale drawing of an engineer, leaving the rest to imagination
I quite like that as well. Stuff like that always gives me butterflies in my stomach.
And once I accidentally wrote smut like that, though so I could try it. And I say accidental because I have no idea how I wrote it. It just sort of came out.

[teruel_a_witch]

it coming out all unrealistic
or worse, all flowery and just screaming fanfic clichés which just makes you roll your eyes xD

I quite like that as well. Stuff like that always gives me butterflies in my stomach.
Yeah, and I just aesthetically like it more, because while physical descriptions done well are not cringe-worthy in English I always think how in Russian they are double cringe worthy and I could never translate that,lol, so there's that. It's the reason I like artsy tasteful smut more than explicit. (explicit is really really hot,though, when done by a person who clearly knows what she's writing about)

When the thing just writes itself it's the best. Maybe the impossible hotness of J/A will guide your hand ;D