Fic: The Very Bad Reaction to Some Very Good News

Oct 27, 2010 03:19

Fandom: Community
Title: The Very Bad Reaction to Some Very Good News
Character/Pairing(s): Ensemble, Britta/Annie, mentions of Jeff/Annie and Jeff/Britta
Rating: PG
Summary: Annie and Britta announce that they're dating. All hell breaks loose.
Disclaimer: I do not own Community or Being John Malkovich.
A/N - I have no idea what this even is. I was ( Read more... )

britta/annie, britta perry, annie edison, community, fanfic

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Comments 13

jheaton October 27 2010, 03:10:33 UTC
Cute! I liked the group interaction, and also this: "Because you're a slut, and you took all the lesbians!" Thanks for sharing this story!

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moeexyz October 27 2010, 11:13:35 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyd it.

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bethesdaj009 October 27 2010, 03:43:01 UTC
Great group dynamics! Fabulous job with all of the interactions.

My favorite line? "Pierce, it's not funny when you're actually right."

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moeexyz October 27 2010, 11:13:55 UTC
Thanks :)

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fangirl_101 October 27 2010, 19:54:43 UTC
This has so many great lines. Too many to quote. But--

This:

"Because you're a slut, and you took all the lesbians!"
If you replace "lesbians" with "donuts" this is so totally canon!

"Damn, Jeff is so lucky. He sits between lesbians" Pierce mumbled. Jeff gave him a 'seriously?' look.
"And he made out with them. I wanna make out with a lesbian" Troy added. Jeff moved his expression from Pierce to Troy.
I can so perfectly picture this exact exchange and Jeff shifting his expression from one to the other. Hilarious!

"Yeah, now Jeff's gonna make out with Shirley!" Troy exclaimed. Shirley jumped a little in her seat with shock.
I actually snorted trying to hold in my laughter at this part. And then got really self-conscious because I'm at work right now. lol

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moeexyz October 27 2010, 22:25:28 UTC
Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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zep1980 October 27 2010, 22:56:02 UTC
Great job with all the banter and characterizations - it really felt like a scene from the show. Too many hilarious lines to quote...loved it.

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moeexyz October 27 2010, 23:05:41 UTC
Thank you :)

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lapacifidora October 27 2010, 23:45:31 UTC
"Not a big deal, shnot a shmig shmeal" Jeff snapped. Annie looked at him like he was crazy.

Um, who wouldn't look at Jeff like he was crazy if he said that? :)

Also: You totally had me thinking it was a joke, so good misdirect. And I didn't think I'd ever be up for Annie/Britta, but this was adorable.

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moeexyz October 27 2010, 23:54:51 UTC
Thank you. I don't like Annie/Britta as anything more than friends either, but this just sort of came to me, and I kind of loved it.

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