REVISIONS REQUESTEDmagicdraftersNovember 7 2011, 23:16:27 UTC
REVISIONS The mods feel that though your app is strong, some adjustments need to be made. Please address the following points required for clarification:● We would like to see further explanation for why the character hates lying or living a life as a lie when the wiki resource given describes him as someone pretending to be a child. Further elaborate on this would be appreciated, as well as evidence of this disposition.
● We would also like to see a revised abilities section that focuses less on the gadgets Conan has (as these will not be available to him in Hogwarts) and more on how his intelligence and other skills would fit in the word of Magic Draft. How will he adapt without the gadgets and what spells would he excel in?
● Finally, some clarification about what year Conan would be placed in would be appreciated. If he acts and looks like a child, should he be placed in a lower class or would a class suited to his actual age preferred? Please reply as a comment to this comment within 72 hours so that the mods can see the
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REVISIONS 2modernholmesNovember 7 2011, 23:57:21 UTC
● We would also like to see a revised abilities section that focuses less on the gadgets Conan has (as these will not be available to him in Hogwarts) and more on how his intelligence and other skills would fit in the word of Magic Draft. How will he adapt without the gadgets and what spells would he excel in
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REVISIONS
The mods feel that though your app is strong, some adjustments need to be made. Please address the following points required for clarification:● We would like to see further explanation for why the character hates lying or living a life as a lie when the wiki resource given describes him as someone pretending to be a child. Further elaborate on this would be appreciated, as well as evidence of this disposition.
● We would also like to see a revised abilities section that focuses less on the gadgets Conan has (as these will not be available to him in Hogwarts) and more on how his intelligence and other skills would fit in the word of Magic Draft. How will he adapt without the gadgets and what spells would he excel in?
● Finally, some clarification about what year Conan would be placed in would be appreciated. If he acts and looks like a child, should he be placed in a lower class or would a class suited to his actual age preferred?
Please reply as a comment to this comment within 72 hours so that the mods can see the ( ... )
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