Mar 24, 2009 00:07
i'm going to read the book twilight, and keep track right here, of how horrible it is. i'll try to mention every thing that's wrong with the book, but i'm sure i'll forget stuff.
anyway, i'm off to read chapter one now. blech.
CHAPTER ONE-
bella whines a lot, and is over-emotional. oh and why is she soooo fucking worried about "standing out"? "oh noes, i'm pale and i wear a black jacket and i drive a beat-up truck!" she gets butt-hurt because some "hott" guy doesn't talk to her. everyone else in the town hits on her.
yeah, this is a great way to start a book.
also, the sentence structures are like, all the same. that annoys me. stephenie meyer is a shit writer.
critique,
anti twilight