Title: Picture This
Groups: 2PM, miss A
Pairings: Chansung/Fei, Minjun/Wooyoung, Taecyeon/Junho
Rating: PG-13
Length: 10,600 words
Summary: Later he will take a look at the picture of them with drooping eyelids, touching lips and claiming hands, and it will grip at him the same way it did just now.
Notes: AU loosely inspired by the last prompt
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Idek where to start???? (Btw you know who this is lol. I'm trying to get better about actually commenting because tweets get lost).
Ok probably with ChanFei. Like....Chan.....Fei......I mean I KNEW already but I didn't expect like hot & heavy right out the gate tho (not a complaint lol). And ofc Minjun would be the one to think to catch them in the act lol.
Which leads me to my next thing: Woo-freakin'-Kay. Like omg I love how you wrote this. I love how you wrote them and the picture scenes. Omg you described everything so well that I could picture what they were doing perfectly. And the way you described how Minjun was looking at Woo here "Minjun's smile is bright as he looks at his beloved one and Chansung takes an unannounced picture of that, because it's beautiful and true and he doesn't want to miss the light in their eyes." (Alcest - Wings plays faintly in the bg tbh).
But then some of these pictures tho....like I literally became the eye emoji. Intimacy, yup. And all the little kisses and then the balcony scene, ESPECIALLY the balcony scene. PLEASE ;______; When Minjun ended up having to tell Chansung to get out already lolllll. But also the fact that they ended up dancing had me a little ;;
Oh and before I forget, I've said it a thousand times before but legit how do you write kisses so well omg.
And so I kinda had guessed my ideal type would end up mentioned here because of course Changmin = cooking, but thank you for that :3
But also FEI. I love how you wrote her here. Like Fei, girl....GIRL. But also the way you captured Chansung's feelings for her, how ideal tbh. That last scene was killer. It was the perfect ending but I am greedy and want more lol.
And I still have to mention TaecHo. Like you got Junho perfectly and the babe thing is just......sighs for a thousand years, "stubborn babe," my fave. And Taecyeon was such a....idek how to describe this but...(a douche? Lol) That's Taec for ya lol. But the ~ambiguous TaecHo was nice like, you couldn't tell what exactly was going on but it was still definitely TaecHo. And it was great how you hinted at Junho burning food 8)
But again OMG MOW it was so good and so worth the wait, thank you for this :3
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Thank you so so so much for commenting here! <3 It's like you said, even though we talk on twitter it's just easier to find things this way and I do like to go back and read comments again once in a while, especially when I need some motivation. :)
I didn't expect like hot & heavy right out the gate tho (not a complaint lol)
That wasn't planned but I'm not complaining either... lol I started this fic with the scene where WooKay are on the bed (the first set of pics), but I knew I wanted to include things in the beginning, and then they just... happened lol. I had fun writing all this but at the same time it was... hard... haha. I really wanted to explore the ChanFei and I might have gone overboard but I also like how it turned out and I'm glad you enjoyed that too :3
As I told you before, I just kept getting more ideas for WooKay??? but there was a point where I needed to tell myself I should save some for other stories dmajklfndsajk This becamse much longer than I could foresee but maybe it's just the right length since it made you (and me) want more? >8)
I have a thing for WooKay and dancing. That's obvious right now but like after the choreography for My House??? I can just see these two coming up with more moves like that, haha.
how do you write kisses so well omg.
/giggles x 143/ I LOVE WRITING KISSES. idk how the words come to me but I guess I imagine things and then... yeah. I'll shut up now, lol.
But also FEI. I love how you wrote her here. Like Fei, girl....GIRL. But also the way you captured Chansung's feelings for her, how ideal tbh. That last scene was killer. It was the perfect ending but I am greedy and want more lol.
*________* I was kinda worried about portraying her and I had this idea about her personality that I wanted to show and I hope that came through. But just the fact that you liked it is the most important. <3 And the same goes for Chansung's feelings and the last scene. <33
Will I ever write TaecHo without Taec calling Junho "babe" at some point? It's just... dmajkfndals yeah Taec was kind of a douche here but I hope not too much and also the way he teases Junho all the time is just part of their dynamics here. Or maybe they're just flirting. Who knows........ /wiggly eyebrows/ Remember when we talked about another TaecHo scene from this au? I think it was on kkt and there was touching hands and maybe they were making bread? I wanted to include that here so bad but it wouldn't fit in the story so I'm saving that and other things I left out for later. 8)
I just love that you wrote that TaecHo in the kitchen fic while I was still struggling with this story and then we could connect both of them. Seriously it's just /sparkly eyes emoji/
Thank yoooouuuu again!!! All the prompts we keep sending each other and Kat too helped bring this to life and I loved writing this so yeah. I owe it to you and Kat for sharing these otps with me. :3
p.s.: I'm sorry my answer got so long mdajklfndajks
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