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mmouse15

Story: What Friends Do

Jun 23, 2008 15:18

Title: What Friends Do
By: mmouse15
Pairing: JazzxProwl
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None, really. Fluff?

A/N: This is a birthday gift for vejiraziel. Happy Birthday, sweetie! I hope you enjoy.

( The story follows. Clicky! )

prowl, friends, jazz, fanfiction

Comments 30

vericus June 23 2008, 21:54:41 UTC

You used 'thrice' in a fanfic! Correctly! You win! *glomp*

And and...the angst, there is so much of it! And yet it's fluffy and awesome...Needless to say, I liked this muchly.

Also, now I need to go write something for Veji's birthday. I didn't know it was today until I saw this. :(

mmouse15 June 23 2008, 23:52:21 UTC

Thankies! I love the phrase 'thrice-damned idiot'. It's got such a wonderful feel to it.

I'm so glad you like it. I'm embarrassed that there were a couple of typos in it and Jay caught them just now...

I'm sorry I didn't tell you! LJ sent me a message Saturday about it...you need to friend her.

vericus June 24 2008, 00:56:50 UTC

Typos happen. So do major story errors, like I just spotted in the fic I just scribbled off. lol.

And I do have her friended, but I didn't get a birthday reminder because LJ hates me. :(

mmouse15 June 24 2008, 03:33:59 UTC

I'm so sorry LJ hates you...__wilderness__ is my source for many birthdays; since she's in England, she posts early on birthdays. Friend her? She's a wonderful person.

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ex_naggingf June 23 2008, 22:17:36 UTC

What a nice gift, M! That was so lovely and bittersweet. I'm happy they worked it out at the end (I'm sure there'll be interfacing SOON)

mmouse15 June 23 2008, 23:54:54 UTC

I just wanted to do a friendship story, and it's hard!
Quit egging me on, you.

The kids are very excited about seeing you tomorrow.

ex_naggingf June 23 2008, 23:58:57 UTC

I'm doing a friendship picture ^^

But there needs to be a sequel here...

I can't wait to see them too XD

vejiraziel June 24 2008, 00:11:39 UTC

*helps wit the Egging!*

vejiraziel June 23 2008, 23:21:19 UTC

That was so beautiful, sweet and somewhat sad but also so hopeful! I love it! Thank you so much for doing this for me ;-;!

mmouse15 June 23 2008, 23:56:19 UTC

You are welcome.

It's a small effort, after all you do...

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mmouse15 June 23 2008, 23:57:22 UTC

Thank, Cat! That's really a nice compliment, and I appreciate it. I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

dark_daebereth June 24 2008, 01:03:22 UTC

That's a lovely gift, and just gorgeously written. It was all progressing so nicely for them... I shrieked when the bet was mentioned. Lovely bittersweet and hopeful at the end.

mmouse15 June 24 2008, 03:30:16 UTC

Thank you - I'm glad you liked it, and your compliments make me feel all snuggly inside!