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Sweet Dreams

Apr 19, 2010 21:51

Title: Sweet Dreams
Author: bsg_aussiegirl
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Laura and Bill
Rating: M

( Sweet dreams )

rating: m, adama/roslin, author: bsg_aussiegirl, mlh: holiday

Comments 15

icedteainthebag April 19 2010, 20:22:57 UTC

This was so good!! Sigh. So good. And your use of the prompt was twofold. Very nice. ;)

“Thank you, Commander,” she said in a voice much more husky than she had intended.

“Anytime,” he murmured.

The UST is *amazing* here. They are so good at that. (It's why they had such awesome sex when they finally got together, right?)

Their dialogue was right-on, and I loved Laura interacting with the children. She seemed incredibly happy then. This fic was so delightful and enjoyable but then, in true BSG fashion, you drop this bomb:

She was dying of cancer. She would be going on a permanent holiday soon enough. There was little point to making plans for the future.

Kudos for that. What a kick to the gut. I enjoyed it.

His hands looked as if he would be well suited for the role of masseur, she thought evocatively. She could almost feel those hands rubbing up and down her arms. Her reverie of his slow strokes caused the hairs on her arms to stand on end and goose bumps to form.I love how you have her thinking of Bill through the whole thing ( ... )

bsg_aussiegirl May 4 2010, 08:20:37 UTC

I will reply properly later but I am LOL that you knew I was an Adama fangirl. Guilty as charged.

bsg_aussiegirl May 5 2010, 02:28:46 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed. I love Bill and Laura's UST. (Actually, you know, I love everything about them.) I really wanted it to be set in season 1 though, so that she could maybe think she was imagining the entire thing. I really appreciate you leaving such a long and lovely review.

sczep84 April 19 2010, 21:26:15 UTC

Aww, beautiful. He made her believe. This made me happy! I'm sure it made Laura happy too *gg* Thanks for sharing!

bsg_aussiegirl May 5 2010, 02:22:11 UTC

I'm so glad you liked one of my stories even though you didn't know it was me - lol. *squishes*

whatever_lj April 27 2010, 01:11:17 UTC

The title of this is so apropos -- it is simply sweet.

bsg_aussiegirl May 5 2010, 02:23:08 UTC

Thanks hon. I'm glad you enjoyed.

kastari April 27 2010, 18:17:09 UTC

She drifted off with a smile on her face and the words ‘we’, ‘their’ and ‘they’ floating in her mind.

“One day.” Those were his words.

He made her believe.

What a sweet, sweet, sweet dream this is...

Very nice.

bsg_aussiegirl May 5 2010, 02:24:45 UTC

Thanks hon. I think I should credit you as co-writer.

kastari May 5 2010, 02:52:38 UTC

Absolutely not!

I simply polish gems that already exist.

: )

missbevcrusher April 30 2010, 01:57:01 UTC

Awwww, so sweet. I really enjoyed this. :-) ♥

bsg_aussiegirl May 5 2010, 02:25:12 UTC

Thanks for letting me know. It's much appreciated.