Comments | mithen: Music of the Spheres Interlude: Pain is Inevitable, Suffering is Optional

mithen

Music of the Spheres Interlude: Pain is Inevitable, Suffering is Optional

Dec 01, 2009 20:35

Title: Pain is Inevitable, Suffering is Optional
Pairing/Characters: Clark/Bruce
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None needed.
Summary: Clark and Bruce patch each other up in the aftermath of a painful--and yet oddly ridiculous--battle.
Word Count: 2600
Notes: Written for the WFGE prompt F6: "A h/c-type story in which both Superman and Batman are injured ( Read more... )

series: music of the spheres, ch: bruce wayne, ch: clark kent, wfge09, p: clark/bruce

Comments 71

northern_star December 1 2009, 11:57:02 UTC

HEEEEEEEEE! It's my prompt!!!

*takes deep breath* no time to read now, I have to leave for work, but I'm soooooooo looking forward to reading this when I get there!

My prompt! it's my prompt!!! *dances around*

mithen December 1 2009, 14:47:43 UTC

Oh, yay, I'm glad it's your prompt! :) It was a really fun one to write, I couldn't resist it...

northern_star December 1 2009, 16:09:09 UTC

Evil My Little Ponies made me laugh sooooo much. Teehee! That's like the craziest, but most amusing thing to have attacking Superman. I can just imagine them and I'm snorting with laughter.

Love that they clinked their inhalers together - it seems like such a sweet thing to do. <3 And this: Come on, hero, stop being macho. *giggles* That was just so perfect. :)

I wonder how long it took them to get all the way up to the second floor? lol! Poor boys! *pets them*

Thank you so much for this! *glomps* It was exactly what I hoped for - a little bit of bickering (and awesome dialog!) and a lot of caring for one another. <3 *happy sigh* I really loved this! You've totally made my day!!

Thank you!!

mithen December 2 2009, 00:33:15 UTC

I have no idea where the evil ponies came from! I was a little afraid it wouldn't fit the feeling of the prompt, but I couldn't resist them...

Awww, I'm really glad you liked it! It was a gorgeous prompt, because it was so fun to imagine each of them ignoring their own injuries and totally freaking out over the other person's instead. Although I made myself woozy doing research on burns and such...but it was worth it in the name of fanfic! :)

Thanks for the prompt and the sweet comment!

gogglehead84 December 1 2009, 12:03:43 UTC

Both of them putting the others priorities first <3, so sweet. I love the robotic MLP idea too lol! I can just imagine Superman leading a parade of pink ponies through Metropolis.

mithen December 1 2009, 14:48:59 UTC

Hee, I was thinking of toys Toyman could use and realized that unlike DC, I could use trademarked toys, ho ho ho... :) The image was so bizarre I couldn't resist it!

munnin_odanin December 1 2009, 12:20:28 UTC

Death by evil my little ponies! That's just GOLD!

mithen December 1 2009, 14:53:25 UTC

*grin* Glad you enjoyed! The image of Superman slugging a pink pony in the nose jumped into my head and I couldn't get it out, lol...

dizmo December 1 2009, 12:32:03 UTC

N'awwwwwwwwwwwww! Boooys, so concerned with each other. And I'm giggling so much. Just... The mental image of Batman driving into a giant mechanical My Little Pony is quite possibly one of the most golden mental images OF ALL TIME.

mithen December 1 2009, 14:55:13 UTC

Batman blowing up plastic ponies was just too fun not to write! It was...not part of the prompt so I can't blame that, no, it was all my insane brain... :)

sara_lakali December 1 2009, 16:14:00 UTC

"Evil My Little Ponies. That is the stupidest gimmick ever," Bruce growled.

I cannot disagree enough. Evil My Little Ponies are BRILLIANT!

Cute evil is the evilest evil there is because it's unexpected.

mithen December 2 2009, 00:34:34 UTC

Cute evil is the evilest evil there is because it's unexpected.

It really is...there's a reason children's dolls are some of the creepiest things in horror movies. I really enjoyed writing the contrast of the cute and malicious there, lol... Glad you liked it!