Drabble: Prima Facie (Rocket Science, Ben/Hal)

Jan 28, 2009 20:34

Title:  Prima Facie
Fandom:  Rocket Science
Pairing: Ben/Hal
Rating: PG
Summary: Hal's still searching for words, but he seems to have found Ben in the meantime.
Word Count: 337
Notes:  Rocket Science is a little indie movie about high school debate and a boy with a stammer who tries to become a debater.  I saw it over Christmas break and just had to ( Read more... )

p: ben/hal, ch: ben wekselbaum, fandom: rocket science, ch: hal hefner

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northern_star January 28 2009, 14:51:26 UTC
I like the idea behind this - words and silence, and their significance to both these characters. Haven't seen the movie, but it's still pretty obvious what the concepts mean to them -- or at least, it looks like to me.

I think it's cute that the kid with the stammer is the one to win the argument against the other who's clearly pretty good at debate, and (I guess) used to winning them, too. Cuter even that maybe for once he doesn't have to win this one, and he should just...say nothing. (well, maybe he should kiss him again, instead - that'd be nice. *giggles*)

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bradygirl_12 January 28 2009, 16:59:42 UTC
That icon: SO true!

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mithen January 29 2009, 10:39:06 UTC
I think it's cute that the kid with the stammer is the one to win the argument against the other who's clearly pretty good at debate, and (I guess) used to winning them, too.

Yep, Ben's a major champion (though he choked at the finals and never lived it down, poor guy). Ben's also unspeakably gorgeous, lol.

Considering everyone I've ever dated has been a debater, it was inevitable I wrie something for this movie, I think. :) Sexy, sexy words...

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miendie January 28 2009, 14:53:13 UTC
Wow, this is great! Just finished the movie myself.
Loved this part:
Ben keeps up a steady flow of chatter, a stream of words, ironic commentary on anything and everything: the pizza, the waitstaff, the sunset, his frustrations, his hopes and his dreams pressed and folded like laundry. Put away.

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mithen January 29 2009, 10:40:37 UTC
*dances* I was hoping someone on my flist had seen it, lol! I couldn't quite resist, Ben was just way too sexy to resist, and I wanted so much to make a little more literal the bond that the movie mostly only hints at...

Thanks so much for commenting, you make my day!

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bradygirl_12 January 28 2009, 16:58:29 UTC
No clue about this movie but I enjoyed the story! :)

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mithen January 29 2009, 10:45:03 UTC
*grin* Thanks! I can't resist cute debaters...I had this in my head almost before the movie ended. :)

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icarus_chained January 28 2009, 17:33:05 UTC
Never seen the movie, but oh! The words. This makes me love words, and their lack, all over again! Thank you!
*makes note of movie title*

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mithen January 29 2009, 10:47:33 UTC
Oh, oh, I think you'd like this movie a lot! It's bafflingly open-ended at times, but it has some lovely things to imply about words and expressing yourself and human connections. The main female character is kind of a wench, but OTOH she's tough as nails and pretty awesome as well...

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arch_schatten February 2 2009, 22:17:48 UTC
After a while, Ben laughs a little, shakily. "You realize, of course, that this...case...has no solvency at all. And minimal inherency."
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"It's got--significance," Hal finishes, as if he's closed the most important argument of his life.

Heeee! I love the matter-of-fact vs. meaning-of-silence combo this dynamic has going! they are so very cute, and.. something having significance doesn't always have to be anything else. It just is! and they seem to accept it well enough. Silences that have meaning for the win!

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mithen February 3 2009, 07:55:44 UTC
Fluent in silence, whee! :) I think you'd like this movie if you ever come across it! Ben is beautiful (he's played by the guy who plays West in Heroes, who I dislike, but when I didn't realize it was him I thought he was the most beautiful guy I'd ever seen, lol), and very kind to Hal after Hal gets seriously screwed over, and they just kind of rock together. :)

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