Comments | mithen: Heroes of the Squared Circle 38: A Lonely Place

mithen

Heroes of the Squared Circle 38: A Lonely Place

Jul 31, 2014 19:24

Title: A Lonely Place
Relationship: Clark/Bruce
Characters: Clark Kent, Bruce Wayne, Joker, Lex Luthor, Dick Grayson, Wonder Woman, Waylon Jones, Harvey Dent, Selina Kyle
Continuity: Heroes of the Squared Circle, a DC/pro wrestling fusion ( click for notes and all chapters).
Warnings/Spoilers: None
Rating: PG-13
Word Count 4800
Summary: Bruce ( Read more... )

ch: selina kyle, ch: wonder woman, ch: clark kent, ch: waylon jones, ch: joker, ch: dick grayson, ch: bruce wayne, p: clark/bruce, series: heroes of the squared circle, ch: lex luthor, ch: harvey dent

Comments 24

anonymous July 31 2014, 11:53:45 UTC

*whispers* There's a error with the coding! I'll comment properly later!

starsandsea July 31 2014, 11:54:27 UTC

Eeep, that was me!

mithen July 31 2014, 12:21:30 UTC

Oh, thank you so much! *wipes brow after ten minutes of frantic coding* One of the closed carets was in Japanese and I couldn't find where it was, lol. It should work now!

jestana July 31 2014, 15:59:17 UTC

Aw, Bruce went into a funk! I think he's always been inclined to be moody and stuff and the thing with Jason really hit him hard. *giggles madly at Diana knowing about Clark and Bruce* I love it! Honestly, do they think the others are BLIND, DEAF, and DUMB not to know? I love that Tim was the one who helped Bruce figure it out. It's the same with any job: when you love what you do, it shows in your work. When you don't, that shows, too. Poor Jason. At least he gets to live in this 'verse. Uh-oh, Bruce as the heavyweight champ. That'll be interesting.

mithen August 3 2014, 01:15:34 UTC

Aw, Bruce went into a funk! I think he's always been inclined to be moody and stuff and the thing with Jason really hit him hard.

Yeah, even without the death, it's a painful rejection of his sense of morality--which might be somewhat childlike, but he does have his reasons for that!

Uh-oh, Bruce as the heavyweight champ. That'll be interesting.

Yes, yes it will... :) It's a lot of extra responsibility and work, and you know Bruce will take it very seriously!

zolac_no_miko July 31 2014, 21:59:09 UTC

TIIIIIIIIIIIIIIMM AAAAAHHHH MY FAVORITE STALKER, TIIIIIIIIIIIIMMM~!! ♥♥♥

This was a really excellent chapter, I have to say, going into this fic I never expected to feel so emotional about pro wrestling AND YET. I was wondering how they were going to resolve Bruce's problem. I'm glad he's finding his way again.

And then of course PLOT TWIST~

mithen August 3 2014, 01:17:38 UTC

This was a really excellent chapter, I have to say, going into this fic I never expected to feel so emotional about pro wrestling AND YET. I was wondering how they were going to resolve Bruce's problem.

Isn't that weird? I never really expected to be able to drag anyone into this world because it's SO LOOPY, and yet it makes for a very fun mirror of the canon. I'm really glad to hear it's working for you and thank you for letting me know!

(And Tim! I love himmmm!)

bradygirl_12 July 31 2014, 23:44:32 UTC

Poor Bruce, all gloom 'n' doom! But Tim showed him the way, along with Clark. That was a great scene in the gymnasium.

Bruce's revelation was a great "Ah, ha!" moment. :) Jason didn't love being Robin and Jack loves being Joker and the audience knows it. Oh, yeah!

Heh, Diana never suffers fools...or silly friends...gladly. :)

Glad Jason got a big boost in the MMA from his memorable match in the DCW. Maybe he'll try again as Red Hood. :)

Wow, Bruce is gonna be the champ! I thought Luthor had told him that Clark wouldn't be matched with him anymore or something dire. But this is going to be SO INTERESTING!!! ;)

mithen August 3 2014, 01:21:06 UTC

Bruce's revelation was a great "Ah, ha!" moment. :) Jason didn't love being Robin and Jack loves being Joker and the audience knows it. Oh, yeah!

Your comment earlier actually helped me get there, so thank you! I wasn't sure how Bruce was pulling out of it, going in...

Heh, Diana never suffers fools...or silly friends...gladly. :)

Oh, not at all! I liked moving her into a closer friendship with Clark here...

And there are definitely bad sides to being champ! A lot more outside work, and you have to wrestle more other people...so it ends up being much the same as if he won't be matched with Clark...but it's not a punishment, just an unfortunate side effect...

ctbn60 August 1 2014, 02:17:57 UTC

Quickly pops in. I LOVED this poor bruce was so broken but tim and clark pushed him passed this. My daughter is giving birth tomorrow so I just popped in fast to say I loved it!

mithen August 3 2014, 01:26:36 UTC

Ah, congratulations to the new grandmother! *dances* And you're so sweet to stop by and tell me you're enjoying this despite your busy schedule, thank you!