Clarity of Vision, Chapter 30/32

Feb 11, 2014 17:27

Title: Clarity of Vision, Chapter 30/32
Relationship: Thorin/Bilbo
Characters: Bilbo Baggins, Thorin, Kili, Fili, Balin, Dwalin, Dís, Thrain, Thror, Gimli
Fandom: Hobbit
Warnings/Spoilers: None
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 4400
Story Summary: In a Middle-Earth where Erebor never fell, a shadow remains in the heart of the Lonely Mountain. Bilbo Baggins ( Read more... )

ch: thror, ch: bilbo baggins, series: clarity of vision, ch: thorin oakenshield, fandom: hobbit, ch: balin, ch: dis, ch: dwalin, ch: kili, ch: fili, ch: thrain, p: thorin/bilbo

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mithen February 11 2014, 14:08:00 UTC
YOU SNUCK IN ANOTHER LADY DWARF YES VERY YES

Extra lady dwarves for the win! I just find them so fascinating...

Ugh ugh ugh writing Thorin discovering Thror just killed me to write, I had to stop and take a break and cry for a while, I confess it! I'm glad it worked well enough that you had to skim it, if that makes sense...

Hobbits, man--you just can't shake them once they're convinced they're going along with you!

It fell off because it likes to betray its bearers, it sensed someone with a greater potential for evil nearby, and because Thrain smelled like crazy.

The semi-sentience of the Ring totally creeps me out! Brrrr. It was like "OH LOOK ONE OF MY KINDRED RINGS ON A CRAZY DWARF."

I had no idea what Bilbo and Thorin would talk about there in the dark and then realized that of course Bilbo would make a joke, of course he would. And yes, oh dear, I think I could write them throwing themselves into harm's way for each other endlessly. :)

I am really kind of reluctant to write the last two chapters, oh dear! And yet writing Bilbo in a thriving Erebor is a wonderful idea as well... *happy sigh*

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